October Afternoon

Moody clouds gather
as ripe fruit drops from shivering branches 
onto pillows of gold. 
The last of the lustrous flowers,
weary from the summer show,
slouch beside the wasted seed pods of their sisters,
whilst workers head back to hives unsated.

Yet still there’s a butterfly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Clemons Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Nice poem dedication to the coming of fall, Kay. Great imagery in few words. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems,might find some you like. Peace.
Locke Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Thanks Jiril, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll certainly be checking out some of your poems.
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:44 PM
this is a really sweet one for an amazing month of the year.
Locke Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Thanks Andrea, turning a bit chillier today though...
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