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October - Thrust and Parry

Opening the front screen door a fierce wind played tug-of-war Not to be denied, I tried again ~ the chimney whistled in the den

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Date: 10/19/2022 10:33:00 AM
Yep those winds can cause quite the pull on the doors. Nice description, Gershon Have a great day! Bill
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Date: 10/18/2022 9:35:00 PM
Wow Gershon. We must start eating some wheaties or get a storm door. I hope I helped with the solution...
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Date: 10/18/2022 9:11:00 PM
You are fighting the good fight. Let’s hope the snow doesn’t help the wind.
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Date: 10/18/2022 8:16:00 PM
At least it didn't whistle through your head!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/18/2022 8:29:00 PM
On advice from Milton Berle, I stuffed my head with straw yesterday to prevent just such an occurrence. ~ No Vacancies

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