After refreshing my memory about a singing Octave, the Fruit of the Holy Spirit from the Bible, giving AI some information and it wrote me two poems so much better than mine, I felt lead to do this work.
When you repent and ask the Savior in You will sing the first octave note, "Do" which is Love Out of Love you will sing "Re" because Joy Surely will follow thee Peace will be on your path so sing, "Mi" all you please If things go wrong, you will receive Patience Then you can wait and give others time Which will pat you on the back and you'll sing "Fa" because you are halfway there to an octave sung Then "So" ushers in Kindness which begins to flow You'll treat your fellowman with compassion Can we humans attain the note, "La" Where Goodness becomes our nature If so, we are nearly there We might can sing, "Ti" and remain Faithful Gentleness can begin to flow We'll sing "Do" above middle C Then join a choir where Filled with Self-control of our human base nature The Octave that flows out of Love Filled with the Holy Spirit's presence Makes the most beautiful sound Amen
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After refreshing my memory about a singing Octave, the Fruit of the Holy Spirit from the Bible, giving AI some information and it wrote me two poems so much better than mine, I felt lead to do this work.