Oct 31

Bell re-rung lit bag of dung; no treat, so a smelly trick stomping makes a foot quite slick serves him right the cranky old prick -- Horrid Ghosts shrieking goblins bloody sacks creepy maniacs it's all sick fun Halloween on a bun~ icky worms and spiders -- backyard pool with a couple gators -- replacing guardian angels with starkly arousing satyrs -- a night of celebration hosted by the monarch of Evil Contemplation --

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2024 9:33:00 AM

haha. Halloween can sure get gross. Always enjoy reading your creative poems.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/20/2024 3:11:00 PM

Hi Andrea; yep, Halloween is fun, but some take it a bit too far, and get ridiculously outrageous. Blessings my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/15/2024 11:25:00 PM

Dear Joe we live now in a world that doesnt need halloween really, because everything we see in some parts of the world is horrendous, horrifying, and it feels like halloween everyday. But i will not get into details. I do love halloween tho and its one of the most fun festive days i enjoy celebrating. As im usually not a very festive person. I absolutely love how youv written this: and the ending too, is deep, pleasure reading you after a long time, sending you light always.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/16/2024 5:14:00 AM

I have a few spooky relics in my house, mementos of my youth. My wife and I often joke, old as we are now, even scary looking to ourselves in the mirror (who is that creature?), we have no need to spend money on a costumes anymore:) Fright night au naturel:)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/15/2024 8:01:00 PM

Lots of mischief. My sister and her friend soaped a car. She got in a lot of trouble. It was our own father's car. Lol.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/16/2024 5:11:00 AM

Wow, kids, don't mess with dad -- he has the ice cream money...and later on, the keys to the car you want to borrow. Love it:)

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2024 12:51:00 PM

Im not a fan to be honest, its not as big here in the UK, as it is in the states.. I dont like commercialised days and have no enthusiasm to want to take part it in.. but if people want to then it is up to them.. I do get sick of the kids knocking on the door though lol..

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2024 12:06:00 PM

Hi Si; most kids now days go to malls for trick or treat -- it has become too unsafe in large cities to go door to door. Too many lunatics praying on children.

Valsa George

Date: 10/13/2024 9:44:00 PM

Hi Joe, you seem to be indisposed to Halloween celebrations. In a way it is a kind of waywardness. Yet it can be seen as part of social festivity when people are freed from the monotony of everyday existence. We may just see it that way. This is a very interesting read giving much food for thought.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/14/2024 3:58:00 AM

I would not outlaw it for sure. Whatever it is, it is very much a part of our culture and the human psyche. I love Poe stories, Sherlock Holmes -- dark-side is very much a part of human nature -- Halloween can be a good teaching tool. I have a big spider on the door:) I'm certain, during the Dark Ages, a few innocent Faith Healers were burned at the stake. Just because they believed and practiced, nature-paths and spiritual-healing. Probably, the wrong politics as well. Democrat Party in the US, has become a coven of ghouls and bad witches. Just my opinion. Taking a live baby from the womb and killing it...is profound evil. Abortion big business in the US.

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/13/2024 9:40:00 AM

Well Joe its not my bag..It seems to me about a Lot of hags.' And t b h its all a fantasy, in which So many vie to act most horribly..' At least I am Commmenting.' I hope you dont mind the messaging? All the best in Jesus name.'

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/13/2024 9:56:00 AM

Evil shows in many subtle ways...Halloween is one them. Your comments, clarity is always welcomed, Joe. I write to stir clarity in myself and others. Your input is precious. Highly appreciated.