Ocean's Glory

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Deepest indigo, the ocean chills for the evening tide. Gleaming lights captured by the still waters, produce a fluorescent glow. Magically shimmering to create the glisten for her gown. Attired in royal perfection, her bespoke ensemble more stunning than the sea. Moonbeams, abundant with radiant sapphires illuminate her picturesque form. Nothing remains as it is, yet for tonight she will be Queen of the ocean’s glory.

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Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2024 6:41:00 AM

Speaks, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, wonderfully penned, love the image, Constance

Robert Gorelick

Date: 9/26/2024 11:31:00 AM

Lovely! A shame such luminous enchantment tends to be ephemeral. Yet the impact can prove indelible and profound. I didn't know you had been banned. Would I be a busybody to ask why? By the way, how's Brix getting along? Keep on with your indelibly spirited poetry! As always, Robert

Robert Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2024 10:30:00 AM

Sounds like you were blindsided and sabotaged by nefarious forces. Sorry to hear it.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/26/2024 1:46:00 PM

G'day Robert. Thank you for the comment. I Emailed several times asking why. (Curiosity.) I received one answer saying "This account was banned for anti-social behavior" Cheers Wen

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/25/2024 7:18:00 PM

definitely 'she will be Queen of the ocean’s glory' lovely imagery dear poet. happy writing.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/25/2024 7:26:00 PM

Oh sweet Thriveni, now that I am finally released from my month long ban from admin, I can finally answer you. Thank you sweet friend. Your words give me encouragement and hope for brighter days. Keep shining your light to make other's days brighter, sweet one.