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Oceans


"Oceans"

The Sun rises 
I melt 
into your dreams 
again

I could be your Ocean 
I call you back into me
my tides pull you 
further and further in

the shore
is a distant voyage 
our misplaced romance 
a naked calling 

I melt 
into your dreams
again
The Sun rises

away from the shore,
my tides pull you 
further and further in 


Candide Diderot. ‘25







"I wanna stop 
the sun from setting
Oh, don't let it go
I wanna spin
I wanna whirl
I wanna stop 
the world from getting cold...
don't let it go"







k.i.s.s.
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March 21, 2025 at 4:05 AM
"Amber circles stretch astonishing / Silencing glassy water where we've never been / Backwards / Shining waves within each other spin / No one sees them / On the rocks the feeling's sinking in / Reckless..."
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March 21, 2025 at 2:31 AM
"Stop the Sun"/Elysian Fields.
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March 21, 2025 at 2:36 AM
LYRICS/"Stop the Sun", Elysian Fields. https://genius.com/Elysian-fields-stop-the-sun-lyrics
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March 21, 2025 at 2:31 AM
https://youtu.be/kGaOPRjlj9U?si=_KZnyH0Ki1WslQd8
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