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Oceans - of Thought

| Oceans - Of Thought | Harmonised hypothermia sets through the darkened depth of the chasm deep, Like a heavy-weighted wreck of my linguistic mind. As blithe planulae float amongst the turquoise torrents of the surging tides. Efflux my porous skin that secretes the bitter brine, Void of lust, my halitous breath. When will I find the courage that guillotine faith; cut across these saline soothing shores That reflects like crystalline glass, that rips and takes. But, incompetent to see more; the calm of the sea. But under tide the waves topple above like whitewash remembrances Beckoning me to emerge and find, Flavours of youth in the lull of the sea So I begin searching of forever freedoms in the caress of the breeze. I say my adieu to the abyss-abundant sea My love for the ocean; Is a coral of burnt sienna, tipped with lanvanda, and blushing pinks. The azure's solvent divinity has annihilated fear Like an oakum of my sanity My mind finally carefree.

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Date: 10/14/2023 12:11:00 AM
This is such a beautiful, profound, well written poem. Such wonderful imagery. Love the lines,’ In the caress of the breeze’ ‘ Is a coral of burnt sienna ‘ in particular. The poem flows so well and conjures up so much. You are truly a talented writer. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. :):)
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Date: 9/26/2023 2:40:00 PM
Dear friend, Your writing is filled with stunning imagery and an exquisite selection of words. You possess an unparalleled mastery of language, delving into the depths of emotions and resonating with the core of one's being. Your creativity and ability to evoke such intense feelings have resulted in a profoundly heartfelt poem that should be read by many. Much appreciate your uplifting comment on my page
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Date: 9/19/2023 8:57:00 AM
your dreams are of high quality. I love your imagery. The breeze caressed, the sea so full of visions. A wonderful poem.
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