Oceania

Blue satin’ed palette
Air heavy treads runneled face.
Rainbow flys piscean deep.

© Joe Maverick 15-4-2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 1:36:00 AM

Hello Joe , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

James Fraser

Date: 11/4/2013 5:20:00 PM

Terrific wordage and imagery Joe. Definitely up there with the finest of Haiku. A pleasure to witness, James :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 9/29/2013 2:24:00 PM

A cool variation on the usual 575 meter... but it really works! (who cares about strict meter anyway.) Rich imagery and excellent phrasing. BRAVO Joe! Best wishes, Keith

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/21/2013 9:17:00 PM

Clever haiku with stimulating choice of adjectives! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/21/2013 9:35:00 AM

Beautiful image adorned with words and penned in to haiku. Thanks......, loved always, bl

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2013 9:36:00 AM

Excellent haiku and image my dear friend Joe! You're a great poet indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love and big hugs, Leonora

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 2:47:00 PM

lovely haiku, Joe. Soup mail - sorry I took so long to read it and respond

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/5/2013 2:42:00 PM

A fine HAIKU my friend... such eloquence from your masterful pen! Well done!! Best wishes, Keith

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2013 12:04:00 AM

hello Joe. I hope everything is great with you!! it's late but just wanted to say hi.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 4/29/2013 10:18:00 AM

I love this haiku. Beautiful.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2013 7:53:00 PM

Stopping by to say hi, and send you a smile...Linda

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2013 9:50:00 AM

Joe, like the deep blue ocean, satin blue, love your haiku, constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 1:11:00 AM

Thought I would stop by and say hello to you tonight. Hello!

Don Johnson

Date: 4/27/2013 4:53:00 PM

piscean am, another time swam, sharks meat..... all is cool with this ole fool, good on ya Joe my man:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2013 4:54:00 PM

Very colorful and descriptive work that you have penned..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..How is your sick friend?...Sara