Ocean Wave Haiku

under the ocean   ~
shifting of tectonic plates
devastating waves   ~



Written on 27th January 2019

For ocean wave haiku contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/30/2019 6:46:00 PM
back with my congrats. Sorry I don't have time tonight for more than that, Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/31/2019 2:05:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Tom.
Date: 1/30/2019 5:50:00 AM
Fantastic haiku, Tom. Let's hope, what happens under the ocean, stay's under the ocean..lol Welcome back and good luck in the contest. Charlie
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Date: 1/30/2019 5:54:00 AM
lets hope so lol, thanks Charlie, had a great time but all good things come to an end. Tom.
Date: 1/29/2019 9:21:00 PM
Perfect picture, but scary , Tom. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/30/2019 2:08:00 AM
Thanks very much Eve. Tom.
Date: 1/29/2019 2:40:00 PM
I haven't seen this contest but I see congratulations are due! I love your haiku, Tom. I've spent much time studying undersea earthquakes and you describe perfectly how they occur and the damage they can do. Awesome writing -- Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/30/2019 4:39:00 PM
I just hope Earth still exists in a thousand years. We seem hell bent on destroying our planet.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/29/2019 2:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn, its a facinating subject to study how our earth is constantly changing shape, who knows what it will look like in a thousand years time. Tom.
Date: 1/29/2019 8:31:00 AM
Nice haiku, Tom: Something we don't think about much, i.e., what's under the waves -- a poet's 'scientific' perspective!...And congrats on your placement in Tania's contest. Competition was stiff, for sure. Welcome back from your travels (?) Best wishes, Gershon
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/29/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon, the ocean is fascinating for sure. You're right there were some stunning entries. Thanks for the welcome back. Tom
Date: 1/29/2019 8:15:00 AM
- I'm back with congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Sunshine. Tom.
Date: 1/29/2019 2:55:00 AM
All from mother Earth... A good geology lesson indeed...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/29/2019 4:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Pashang. Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 8:13:00 PM
I really liked the unique perspective in your haiku, Tom! Congrats on your win! :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/29/2019 4:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Laura. Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:47:00 PM
Lovely imagery of powerful waves, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/29/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thank you very Tania, there were some stunning entries, thank you also for hosting. Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:38:00 PM
Good one, Tom.
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Date: 1/29/2019 4:43:00 AM
Thank you line. Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations Tom! (and thank you)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/29/2019 4:42:00 AM
Thanks very much Sandra, Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:30:00 PM
Very Nice!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/29/2019 4:41:00 AM
Thank you Timothy. Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 12:42:00 PM
Hi Tom, Mother nature can reap havoc - a force that we can not reckon with - few words, full of meaning, best for a win! Great Haiku Tom. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/28/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer, mother nature is indeed powerful. Hope you're well. Tom.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:42:00 AM
Tom, very nice, a beauty for the contest ~
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/28/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thank you very much D.H.. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 7:38:00 PM
What happens under the sea. Great!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 9:44:00 PM
Thank you very much.Kim. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 4:26:00 PM
Nice one, Tom. I hope to see many winners on her list. I love these kinds of contests.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 5:14:00 PM
Thanks very much Andrea. Tom
Date: 1/27/2019 1:53:00 PM
A striking wave haiku, Tom! A tsunami will follow those tremors and cause havoc. Regards // paul
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul, it must be terryfying to actually see a high wall of water coming towards you, animals can sense them and get very agitated when they approach. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 12:50:00 PM
- ... forces of nature ... powerful ... very well done haiku, Tom :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine, there is nothing more powerful than mother nature and when she's angry watch out. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 8:11:00 AM
ohh, tom.. when the ocean trembles, it becomes dangerous... great juxtaposition here... huggs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Nette, it sure is a powerful force.
Date: 1/27/2019 7:10:00 AM
That is how it happens..well depicted Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 7:18:00 AM
Thanks very much Vijay. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 6:56:00 AM
WOW! Tom, this shook me up lol awesome Haiku, thank you for the Soup email
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Bobby, you're welcome. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 6:21:00 AM
Horrifically great Haiku dear friend, Tom! Are you back from Limerick? Haha
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, haha yes I'm back now. Tom.
Date: 1/27/2019 6:14:00 AM
Great Haiku Tom ! :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/27/2019 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Tom.
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