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Ocean of Yesterday's Dreams

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I stand with you upon the shore of dreams that echo, but are no more. A yesterday where dreams once flowed, The ebbing waves that finally slowed, For dawn of dreams unrealized, We watched together weary eyed. Our arms once open to the tide, Now hang limply at our side; mirrored on smooth waveless sea, Unless perchance you wave with me, Bidding adieu the rushing Streams, That lead to oceans of our Dreams. Now hand in hand, upon dried sand, hearts flow to yesterday. Echos in a concha shell, we turn and fly away.

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Faye Gibson

Date: 3/5/2022 5:59:00 PM

This is beautiful...made me feel a little sad, but so lovely.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/6/2022 2:36:00 AM

Thank you for your visit Fave, it is a little sad, I was feeling somewhat blue as I wrote it. My husband and I are growing old, and though all our dreams didn't come true, we do have peace in the future. Sometimes, it is good to realize some of those amazing youthful dreams were just that, dreams. We've had a blessed life despite anything else :) Thank you so much for your visit and comment <3 ~BJ

Deb M

Date: 2/20/2022 3:26:00 AM

Written so beautifully…..love it BJ! Debx

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/6/2022 2:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Deb, you have blessed me so much. God bless your Sunday and your new week ahead! ~BJ

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 2/15/2022 10:37:00 PM

Beautiful write BJ. ~Anna Kaianah

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/6/2022 2:29:00 AM

Thank you sweet Anna, I so appreciate your visit and kind words <3 God bless your busy Sunday and your new week ahead <3 ~BJ

Bill Baker

Date: 2/13/2022 9:51:00 PM

Nice romantic poem of days past and present, B.J. Enjoyable read, Bill

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/6/2022 2:28:00 AM

Thank you Bill, for your visit and uplifting words to me! Happy Sunday, may God bless your new week ahead <3 ~BJ

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/13/2022 6:00:00 PM

BJ, That and outstanding write. FAV....Blessings ~ Debra

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/6/2022 2:26:00 AM

Thank you Debra, what a blessing you are, I am so honored that this is a FAV for you! I hope you have a blessed Sunday, and week ahead :) <3 ~BJ

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/13/2022 5:39:00 PM

As long as you fly away in unison it is always a good thing, keep your memories close to your heart, love even closer dear Bj, love your precious write, stay well, :)

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/6/2022 2:25:00 AM

Yes, that is true Mystic Rose <3 Thank you for your visit and comment :) I don't know how I missed responding to all of the comments on this poem, but I so appreciate your kind words! God bless you <3 ~BJ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/13/2022 5:19:00 AM

Awesome write, BJ. Your brilliant start says it all: I stand with you upon the shore of dreams that echo, but are no more...

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/13/2022 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Vijay, you uplift so many of my days with your kind comments <3 Hope you are having a blessed Sunday!