"ocean Love"

Streams glide like a ballerina...
Rivers run like a sled down a hill...
Lakes lay like sheet of glass...
But Oceans do it all, they can be
quiet or angry just that fast..
An Ocean is like a lady unpredictable.
yet you can't take your eyes off..
She can change her mind and swallow
you up in an instant..
She can carry you out to sea or leave
at the sand..
Either way as a man I know I'm speaking 
for all when I say..There is nothing in the world 
softer or sweeter then a women in your hand..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 10:12 AM
SOUP MAIL.. IMPORTANT .. luv this one still
A   Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Wow! such nice words and the ending is so breath taking. Enjoyed, u have s. mail..p.d.
Pattison Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Nice word-usage, I really enjoyed reading this. Regards, Gavin.
Neels Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 8:21 AM
You always suprise me with your endings.. Love the comparison ~ rgds WN
Murphy Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 7:18 AM
very nice write so sweet loved it and thanks for your kind comments have a great day faleshia
Devonshire Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Admire the way you compare the unpredictability of a woman to the ocean. Very thought-provoking message from a great writer! Love, Carolyn
King Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Great poem. i really enjoyed reading this today...love nikki.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:00 PM
SOUP MAIL..luv..
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Michael, what a darned kool title. Eclipsed by lovely poetry >> James
La France Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Very beautiful words... well done.. love constance
Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 2:45 PM
OMG Michael ..u have outdone yourself ..this is breathtaking and beautiful.. wise words of such wisdom too.. a new fav for the "Sweetheart" and u have SOUP MAIL...
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