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Ocean Hunger - Haiku

Ocean Hunger - Haiku Girl nude, applies salt Covers body in butter Hungry waves lick her

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2014 11:55:00 PM

oh my goodness. She is a very adventurous one!! I think tanning butter does not require salt. hahaha

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/2/2014 8:58:00 AM

Good morning Andrea, I hope you are having a nice week end and pleasant Sunday. You are right. There is already enough salt in the ocean. Maybe she was simply complimenting or enticing the sea. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting. Take care. Earl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2014 11:55:00 PM

Love the ending of this one.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/2/2014 9:03:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Yes. That salty but not unpleasant taste. Thanks. Haiku can be fun. I'm glad you liked it. Have a nice day. Earl

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/1/2014 8:14:00 PM

Salt and butter taste to lick....very interesting to read.Regards poet Eari. -Safa

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/2/2014 9:06:00 AM

Hi Safa. Glad you enjoyed it. Ocean waves licking rocks all the time gets boring. Variety is the spice of life. I hope you have a great day. Earl