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Ocean Breeze

There once was a blue whale who had the flu He went to the doc and asked what to do -- Doc replied, "Just don't sneeze You'll create such a breeze -- My stethoscope won't detect your achoo."

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/4/2019 11:02:00 AM

A sneezing whale might blow the doctor out of the window after his achoo blows the window out. I can see a whole series of these.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2019 12:41:00 PM

Maybe Microsoft could base 'Windows 15' on this bold concept. LOL. Thanks for this window into your thoughts, CK. :) gw

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/2/2019 8:01:00 PM

G'day Gershon … another fine limerick Gershon. A sneezing whale is rarely written about - thank you - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2019 9:40:00 PM

Appreciate your feedback, Lindsay. Hadn't crossed my mind, but you're right. Don't see too much about sneezing whales these days. (LOL). I've decided to do something about that, evidently. LOL again. Thanks again, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/2/2019 5:46:00 PM

Too cute, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2019 7:28:00 PM

Interesting comment, Line: I had thought that just as women can never be too young or too thin, so too with limericks--they can never be 'too cute.' LOL. Thank you so much. ~ gw

Jan Allison

Date: 7/2/2019 5:08:00 PM

you are getting so good at these limericks GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2019 5:30:00 PM

From you, the 'Limerick Queen,' this is high praise, indeed. Thank you, Jan! :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/2/2019 4:55:00 PM

LOL Great one Gershon! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/2/2019 5:29:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Heidi! :) gw