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A poem lovely as an ocean, God created words that were spoken. An ocean's sapphire blue length and breadth, In its womb creatures play in its depth. An ocean's play upon the waves tease, I can breathe God's ocean briny breeze. An ocean's breast seagull hungry line, Squawking they sip the morning sunshine. An ocean's bed of froth wave darkness, Mysteries it hides in its deepness. A poem lovely and alluring, An ocean's beating soul enduring. 3/1/2022
Trees Joyce Kilmer - 1886-1918 I think that I shall never see A poem lovely as a tree. A tree whose hungry mouth is prest Against the sweet earth's flowing breast; A tree that looks at God all day, And lifts her leafy arms to pray; A tree that may in summer wear A nest of robins in her hair; Upon whose bosom snow has lain; Who intimately lives with rain. Poems are made by fools like me, But only God can make a tree.

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Date: 3/4/2022 7:05:00 AM
Hi Eve…A lovely poem about the magnificence of our beautiful ocean. Debx
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Date: 3/3/2022 12:55:00 PM
thanks for letting me know about this one, Eve. You chose a GOOD word with ocean. I agree with you that the ocean is so lovely.
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Date: 3/3/2022 10:32:00 AM
A gorgeous poem about the ocean Eve.
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Date: 3/2/2022 2:13:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, Eve, as you may know, I am partial to the sea. Actually, your parody is superior to Kilmer's original, in my opinion.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2022 4:28:00 PM
You made my day, Milton, thank you for the wonderful encouraging compliment.
Date: 3/2/2022 11:57:00 AM
Hello Eve, in my mind I see the imaginar ocean first with the waves , then without the ripples. A wonderful poem. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/3/2022 11:46:00 AM
Hello Eve, water flowing with waves rushing to the shores is calming. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2022 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Bless you.
Date: 3/2/2022 8:37:00 AM
Excellent!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2022 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Valerie, for reading my verse and visiting.
Date: 3/2/2022 5:13:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Hope all is well. HUgs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2022 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Blessing my friend

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