Ocean

I'm an ocean
deep and wide
you never know 
what's going to 
come inside

wrote 5/ 25/ 2018 Fri.  4.15pm

adventureoceanlimerick

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Anil Deo

November 23, 2021 at 7:20 AM

I came inside your poem ... but YOU are an Ocean or two or three ... away. shalom, shalom: Thanksgiving & CHRISTmas blessings Debbie. U are missed. anil Deo

Judy Ball

September 17, 2019 at 8:25 PM

The ocean deep, mysterious, beautiful. Nice job. God Bless, JB

John Castellenas

March 6, 2019 at 3:42 AM

Great description of the ocean. You said everything needed in the few words Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich

September 21, 2018 at 6:54 PM

I really like a short poem like this with a profound message!

Bette Bavington

September 17, 2018 at 1:17 PM

You could of been talking about people. We all absorb things some good and some bad. Short sweet and right to the point. I hope you have a good day.

Duke Beaufort

August 22, 2018 at 12:28 PM

Hey there! Another beautiful expansive thought. Simple and yet so unassuming. Of course this has other meanings to those of us who are obsessed with sexual metaphors. Can I be the only one? I imagine not, but I am comfortable enough to say it. I actually like thinking about how unbiased and accepting this appears to what happens to us each day.

Eric Boddie

July 27, 2018 at 2:04 PM

swallow me up if you must....but i can swim, in that you can trust....i will escape before the sky turns dark....because i am a realest, i stay away from sharks....lol....cute work debbie....;)

Gregory Richard Barden

July 26, 2018 at 2:29 AM

What a passionate little gem - love it! :-)

Duncan Chappell

July 24, 2018 at 11:11 AM

so very true love the passion thank you god bless duncan xx

Paul Callus

July 3, 2018 at 2:07 AM

A delightful metaphor, Debbie! Have a nice day:) Regards // paul

Lyric Man

June 8, 2018 at 11:14 PM

Nice write, Debbie!

Therese Bacha

June 8, 2018 at 9:07 PM

Wow Debbie i read it i felt so relaxed afterwards. Its me Terry i am back after a depression relieve. Hope to be able to stay here like before, it was so much fun. Hugs Terry xoxo