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Obstructive Broken Heart

Ongoing obstructive destructive heart
Hurt beyond timeless painful depart

Loveless weak endless criminal feeling
Weird never-ending wrongful seething

Needing caressing of tender broken heart
Feeling growing warm holding to start

Leading forward to a true love deeming
Bringing love to the forefront redeeming

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's	"How to fix a broken heart" contest

3/17/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/17/2012 4:48:00 PM
Well expressed piece, my friend
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:50:00 PM
such a positive way to mend a broken heart, russell... love how this is styled; amazing.. best of luck and huggs!:)
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Date: 3/17/2012 1:19:00 PM
Much enjoyed this Russell , happy st Patrick's day to you and yours , Declan ....
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