Obsidian

An almost stillness came about
as she strode into my door,
like breath itself refused to move,
fearful of touching her mysterious beauty

But her obsidian eyes betrayed her. 

Sharp and gleaming,
with a silver sheen
she looked at me, 
and I knew…

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Molten lava spilled forth from her mouth, melting our clocks—
eighteen hundred nightmares compressed in two hours.
Long hand moving forward, as the short hand moved backward
How can memories persist in such an acrid life?

She spoke of a beast in the guise of a man,
 one who ravaged innocence with the flick of a click
A coward that collected milk teeth for hardened bones
of other horny beasts with no spine

That throaty tenderness when she spoke 
sprinkled crystal seeds of frustration in me
She says he loathed him, denied she loved him
but her obsidian eyes betrayed her

There she was, a bud he plucked from the nuns’ garden
He grafted then he pruned her, 
spreading her pollen, wafting her scent
yet folding her petals to himself

Caterpillars feeding upon her leaves,
she lets them devour her,
yet once they are wrapped in their cocoons to sleep,
she stabs them with her thorns.

Tears then slid down from her midnight lace eyes
and it was all I could do to catch them
She said she was weary of curtailing butterflies,
of tearing their wings before they can even fly

I had to ask, how many… how many winged gems?
She lifted her sleeves, and showed me her scars
One ugly mark for each innocent child plunged deep,
my heart getting slashed at least three hundred a beat.



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A certain stillness came about
as I strode into her door,
like fear itself refused to move,
letting breath touch her mysterious beauty for the last time....

Her obsidian eyes had betrayed her. 

Sharp and gleaming,
with a silver sheen
I looked at the knife beside her.

Maroon-mapped sheets, a stunted womb.
 
Strains of Bon Iver’s “Flume”
flit past the sighing air like a butterfly,
and I knew…









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Ryerson Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Fave!
Ryerson Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 11:57 AM
I am stunned and awestruck. 'Terrifying beauty' is how I would describe this,,,Reminds me just a tad of the portrayal of the Devil in 'The Passion of Christ' which was a stroke of genius in my opinion...Have your heard The Band's version of Bob Dylan's 'When I Paint My Masterpiece?' Well my friend, you have painted yours...
Neels Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Awesome Missy :) Double Wow, so good to be reading one of your gems again.. Hope you are doing okay.. *mwahugs*
Ayala Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:00 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved magnificent win! Regards, Kika
Manassian Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Sorry I missed this. ;) I stay away from scary...Yes, I'm a scardy cat, but oh NIKKO...your talent shines here. As all the poets have written below...you are gifted. It give me the creeps...those obsidian eyes...I felt the mystery....Wonderful write and congrats on your fine win! :)
Rodgers Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Wow, wow and a lot of tremolo. It took me a while to get my head around this - should be read with punk rock blaring in the headphones. Congrats on your win
De La Luna Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Wow! this is awesome! Congratulations!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Wow Nikko, deep and cutting to the core! She asked for dark and you gave her obsidian. How apropos. You need to make poetry your life's ambition, you are that talented my friend. I am in awe! Congratulations on your top honor. Blessings, Connie
Mohn Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:13 PM
Terrific writing Nikko...well deserved winner...thanks for the kind comments on mine as well
Ryerson Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Go DIRECTLY to my favs, do NOT pass go...A true horror masterpiece Nikko - Tim-----PS: Fav poet too...
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:25 AM
Amazing write my friend n a great win, huge congrats!
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:06 AM
I did enjoy the intrigue in the poem, congrats on the win
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:07 AM
I just read Andrea's comment. Nikko. How are you? I never knew you have your name and avatar
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:05 PM
DANG, Nikko, Is this a NEW one that I had missed?? You really got into it with this one. WOW. This has to be the darkest of all the dark poems on her list. BIG congrats.I am so happy for you.
A   Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Hi Nikko, it's been a long time... Sorry, I'm not hearing anyone or thing these days... Hope you are well, congrats on this win...LINDA
Walker  Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Nikko, this is a marvelous write of intrigue... Congrats! on your first place win... Verlena
Gibson Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Fabulous write, Nikko. I could read it many times and find more each time. Putting it in my favorites so I won't lose it. Congratulations.
Richards Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Wow Nikko.......and where in that deep place of your imagination, did this poem come? I agree with Charlotte, it is so dark and intriguing, and so different that your other poems........it is a wowser! I wonder how you were inspired to come up with this deep and dark poem!! Congrats....well deserved! Love your metaphoric weave!
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on a high place win,
Puddifoot Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:44 AM
it's good to see you topping the winners' list in my contest, nikko, a rare appearance from you! you always create such original poems, and this one captured me from the first time I read it...it's very dark and intriguing, and I wondered if it is based on a true story or if it is purely fictional(?) there are many layers to the poem...I love "flick of a click" and "maroon-mapped sheets" (I clocked the alteration in that line and I like it) - congrats on your top win in my contest! :)
Horsman Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:42 AM
wow so profound,,,Nikko, you sure highlight what is a major problem today,,,amazing poetry
Mehta Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 6:25 AM
Amazing write on abuses and mystery,
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