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I met this cool dude called Jaffa At the beginning he was so sweet to me Sadly after a while he gave me the pip In the end he ran out of juice and I had to squash him Then I pulverised his flesh to a pulp Cheers! Contest: United Colours Orange Sponsored by Silent One 03~04~16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:53:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 7:37:00 PM

Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Frank Black Blacharczyk

Date: 3/10/2016 3:15:00 PM

Cheers! Imagery is fun Sounds like a good old battle royal. I like pulp in my orange juice.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2016 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Frank just a fun write inspired by the contest theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/8/2016 10:57:00 PM

Congrats on POTD! Jaffa sounds like the name of a parrot! LOL great write!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2016 4:36:00 PM

Ha Ha that made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2016 5:30:00 PM

Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2016 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2016 11:30:00 AM

:) This was some write, Jan....Congrats on POTD, my dear. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2016 5:35:00 PM

Thanks Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 3/7/2016 7:44:00 AM

Congrats on POTD just came on site and saw your win. Sorry have not been keeping up. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2016 5:35:00 PM

Hope you are keeping well mama bear:-) hugs jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/7/2016 6:07:00 AM

Lol... Is that Jaffa smiling in the pic? Congrats for your WIN buddy!!! ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2016 5:34:00 PM

I found the pic after i wrote the poem lol it may be Jaffa's brother as Jaffa got pulped lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2016 8:21:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congratulations on your placement on the contest. Also it seems Congratulations on Poem Of the Day, i almost missed that Jan. Enjoyed the poem, i just have to remember never to have the nick-name Jaffa....MIKE.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2016 5:34:00 PM

lol Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 3/6/2016 6:43:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2016 5:33:00 PM

Many thanks Cindi I was surprised and delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/6/2016 4:51:00 PM

Congrats to you on the Poem Of The Day! "Jaffa, you shouldn't have!"...:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 4:51:00 PM

LOL thanks Walter:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/6/2016 4:00:00 PM

Double congrats, Jan, on your win for the 'orange' contest and for Poem of the Day! Very clever! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 4:12:00 PM

Many thanks Sandra I am surprised and delighted:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/6/2016 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest and for the POTD Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:45:00 PM

Thanks so much Nayda I'm surprised and delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/6/2016 10:49:00 AM

Very Orange-iginal Jan...Congrats on POTD

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:44:00 PM

LOL:-) Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 3/6/2016 10:25:00 AM

Jan, you are always the most clever poet out there and silly too! ...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:44:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo - i never know what my muse will come up with next lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2016 8:08:00 AM

- Congratulations with p.o.t.d.and your win in contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:43:00 PM

I'm surprised and delighted Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Red Fiery

Date: 3/6/2016 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations. ...this is definitely a great write !

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:43:00 PM

Thanks Red:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 7:30:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, a clever piece.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Richard I've only just read the comments and discovered the good news:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/6/2016 7:27:00 AM

This is a very funny unique poem, Jan. Love the humor as you know. Congratulations on POTD. Peace dear lady:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 3:41:00 PM

Wow Thanks for the great news Daniel! I thought out of the box for this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/5/2016 7:54:00 PM

Nicely penned Jan...Cheers!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 12:06:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2016 3:55:00 PM

I got a kick out of your cute entry Jan. Thinking of what to write for this color took me some time last night. This is a great entry for the contest. ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 4:18:00 PM

Thought I would think out of the box - have missed out on 2 of the contests so got this one early:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/5/2016 1:35:00 PM

You are wonderful, may your humor never end!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 3:39:00 PM

Aww thanks Eve - he asked us to think out of the box so I did lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/5/2016 11:50:00 AM

Wonderfu smiling funny poem, well done my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 3:39:00 PM

Thanks BL glad it made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2016 11:16:00 AM

you and your funny bone, jan..lol... enjoyed this comic trip!...mail sent; huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/5/2016 10:45:00 AM

Laughed my ass off! You're the best. Orange you glad you wrote it. A Huge Fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 3:40:00 PM

Glad it made you smile my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 3/5/2016 8:43:00 AM

How "orang-inal"... thanks for the AM chuckle..

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thanks John - he asked us to think out of the box lol mine is a box of orange juice I think lol:-) hugs Jan xx