Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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Obsessive Orange

I met this cool dude called Jaffa
At the beginning he was so sweet to me
Sadly after a while he gave me the pip
In the end he ran out of juice and I had to squash him
Then I pulverised his flesh to a pulp
Cheers!

Contest: United Colours Orange Sponsored by Silent One

03~04~16

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Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 11:53 PM Jan, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~ Jan Allison March 17, 2016 at 7:37 PM Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Frank Black Blacharczyk March 10, 2016 at 3:15 PM Cheers! Imagery is fun Sounds like a good old battle royal. I like pulp in my orange juice. Jan Allison March 10, 2016 at 4:37 PM Thanks Frank just a fun write inspired by the contest theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso March 8, 2016 at 10:57 PM Congrats on POTD! Jaffa sounds like the name of a parrot! LOL great write! Jan Allison March 10, 2016 at 4:36 PM Ha Ha that made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick March 7, 2016 at 5:30 PM Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara Jan Allison March 8, 2016 at 1:10 PM Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian March 7, 2016 at 11:30 AM :) This was some write, Jan....Congrats on POTD, my dear. Hugs Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 5:35 PM Thanks Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear March 7, 2016 at 7:44 AM Congrats on POTD just came on site and saw your win. Sorry have not been keeping up. Hugs Edith Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 5:35 PM Hope you are keeping well mama bear:-) hugs jan xx

Teddy Kimathi March 7, 2016 at 6:07 AM Lol... Is that Jaffa smiling in the pic? Congrats for your WIN buddy!!! ;-) Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 5:34 PM I found the pic after i wrote the poem lol it may be Jaffa's brother as Jaffa got pulped lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven March 6, 2016 at 8:21 PM Hi Jan, Congratulations on your placement on the contest. Also it seems Congratulations on Poem Of the Day, i almost missed that Jan. Enjoyed the poem, i just have to remember never to have the nick-name Jaffa....MIKE. Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 5:34 PM lol Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Cindi Rockwell March 6, 2016 at 6:43 PM Congrats on POTD!!! Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 5:33 PM Many thanks Cindi I was surprised and delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Walter T. Ashe March 6, 2016 at 4:51 PM Congrats to you on the Poem Of The Day! "Jaffa, you shouldn't have!"...:-) Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 4:51 PM LOL thanks Walter:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight March 6, 2016 at 4:00 PM Double congrats, Jan, on your win for the 'orange' contest and for Poem of the Day! Very clever! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 4:12 PM Many thanks Sandra I am surprised and delighted:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 6, 2016 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest and for the POTD Jan. Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:45 PM Thanks so much Nayda I'm surprised and delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith March 6, 2016 at 10:49 AM Very Orange-iginal Jan...Congrats on POTD Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:44 PM LOL:-) Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars March 6, 2016 at 10:25 AM Jan, you are always the most clever poet out there and silly too! ...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles* Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:44 PM Thanks LuLoo - i never know what my muse will come up with next lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2016 at 8:08 AM - Congratulations with p.o.t.d.and your win in contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:43 PM I'm surprised and delighted Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Red Fiery March 6, 2016 at 7:53 AM Congratulations. ...this is definitely a great write ! Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:43 PM Thanks Red:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2016 at 7:30 AM Congrats on POTD, a clever piece. Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:42 PM Thanks Richard I've only just read the comments and discovered the good news:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner March 6, 2016 at 7:27 AM This is a very funny unique poem, Jan. Love the humor as you know. Congratulations on POTD. Peace dear lady:) Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 3:41 PM Wow Thanks for the great news Daniel! I thought out of the box for this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May March 5, 2016 at 7:54 PM Nicely penned Jan...Cheers! Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 12:06 AM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2016 at 3:55 PM I got a kick out of your cute entry Jan. Thinking of what to write for this color took me some time last night. This is a great entry for the contest. ; ) Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 4:18 PM Thought I would think out of the box - have missed out on 2 of the contests so got this one early:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper March 5, 2016 at 1:35 PM You are wonderful, may your humor never end! Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 3:39 PM Aww thanks Eve - he asked us to think out of the box so I did lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath March 5, 2016 at 11:50 AM Wonderfu smiling funny poem, well done my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always,bl Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 3:39 PM Thanks BL glad it made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2016 at 11:16 AM you and your funny bone, jan..lol... enjoyed this comic trip!...mail sent; huggs Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 3:40 PM Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne March 5, 2016 at 10:45 AM Laughed my ass off! You're the best. Orange you glad you wrote it. A Huge Fav! Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 3:40 PM Glad it made you smile my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless March 5, 2016 at 8:43 AM How "orang-inal"... thanks for the AM chuckle.. Jan Allison March 5, 2016 at 10:18 AM Thanks John - he asked us to think out of the box lol mine is a box of orange juice I think lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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