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I met this cool dude called Jaffa At the beginning he was so sweet to me Sadly after a while he gave me the pip In the end he ran out of juice and I had to squash him Then I pulverised his flesh to a pulp Cheers! Contest: United Colours Orange Sponsored by Silent One 03~04~16

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:53:00 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/17/2016 7:37:00 PM
Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/10/2016 3:15:00 PM
Cheers! Imagery is fun Sounds like a good old battle royal. I like pulp in my orange juice.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2016 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Frank just a fun write inspired by the contest theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 10:57:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! Jaffa sounds like the name of a parrot! LOL great write!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2016 4:36:00 PM
Ha Ha that made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 5:30:00 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 11:30:00 AM
:) This was some write, Jan....Congrats on POTD, my dear. Hugs
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 7:44:00 AM
Congrats on POTD just came on site and saw your win. Sorry have not been keeping up. Hugs Edith
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/7/2016 5:35:00 PM
Hope you are keeping well mama bear:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 6:07:00 AM
Lol... Is that Jaffa smiling in the pic? Congrats for your WIN buddy!!! ;-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/7/2016 5:34:00 PM
I found the pic after i wrote the poem lol it may be Jaffa's brother as Jaffa got pulped lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 8:21:00 PM
Hi Jan, Congratulations on your placement on the contest. Also it seems Congratulations on Poem Of the Day, i almost missed that Jan. Enjoyed the poem, i just have to remember never to have the nick-name Jaffa....MIKE.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/7/2016 5:34:00 PM
lol Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!!!
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:33:00 PM
Many thanks Cindi I was surprised and delighted:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 4:51:00 PM
Congrats to you on the Poem Of The Day! "Jaffa, you shouldn't have!"...:-)
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Date: 3/6/2016 4:51:00 PM
LOL thanks Walter:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 4:00:00 PM
Double congrats, Jan, on your win for the 'orange' contest and for Poem of the Day! Very clever! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/6/2016 4:12:00 PM
Many thanks Sandra I am surprised and delighted:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest and for the POTD Jan.
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Nayda I'm surprised and delighted:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 10:49:00 AM
Very Orange-iginal Jan...Congrats on POTD
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:44:00 PM
LOL:-) Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 10:25:00 AM
Jan, you are always the most clever poet out there and silly too! ...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:44:00 PM
Thanks LuLoo - i never know what my muse will come up with next lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 8:08:00 AM
- Congratulations with p.o.t.d.and your win in contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:43:00 PM
I'm surprised and delighted Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations. ...this is definitely a great write !
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Red:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2016 7:30:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, a clever piece.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/6/2016 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Richard I've only just read the comments and discovered the good news:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 7:54:00 PM
Nicely penned Jan...Cheers!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/6/2016 12:06:00 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 3:55:00 PM
I got a kick out of your cute entry Jan. Thinking of what to write for this color took me some time last night. This is a great entry for the contest. ; )
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thought I would think out of the box - have missed out on 2 of the contests so got this one early:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 1:35:00 PM
You are wonderful, may your humor never end!
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Date: 3/5/2016 3:39:00 PM
Aww thanks Eve - he asked us to think out of the box so I did lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 11:50:00 AM
Wonderfu smiling funny poem, well done my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always,bl
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Date: 3/5/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thanks BL glad it made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 11:16:00 AM
you and your funny bone, jan..lol... enjoyed this comic trip!...mail sent; huggs
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Date: 3/5/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 10:45:00 AM
Laughed my ass off! You're the best. Orange you glad you wrote it. A Huge Fav!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/5/2016 3:40:00 PM
Glad it made you smile my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 8:43:00 AM
How "orang-inal"... thanks for the AM chuckle..
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/5/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thanks John - he asked us to think out of the box lol mine is a box of orange juice I think lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2016 5:53:00 AM
Love it, what fun to read. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/5/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Scott:-) hugs Jan xx
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