Obsessive Orange

I saw thy beauty in sunrise 
the tangerine charm of sun that delight
and equated your smooth skin to sunset
when the sun is trying to hide
It is the colour that brings me a smile
It's romantic and like a beautiful dream.
birds chatter, "I love you," with a sweet bliss.
The color orange is memorable for me,
As my lover confessed and endorsed her love to me
these memories are associated with sunset;
Hence, I shall cherish it forever and ever....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 14, 2016 at 11:50 PM
M Asim Nehal, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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March 7, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
Nehal Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thanks Much , Maa'm Sara
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Hi M, Congratulations on you placement in the contest with this dreamy orange write....Vlad.
Nehal Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Thanks much Vladislav
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your win M Asim
Nehal Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Thanks much Nadya
Leiser Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your win, M Asim :)
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:12 AM
M Asim, I meant congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
Nehal Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Thanks Much Laura D...
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March 6, 2016 at 9:13 AM
- Asim, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Nehal Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 7:58 PM
this is a really sweet take on orange. I like it a lot.
Nehal Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thanks much Andrea
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Asim, this is LOVELY so beautifully penned and I am loving it 7 ~
Nehal Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Thank u so much Dear Linda
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