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Obsessive Orange

I saw thy beauty in sunrise the tangerine charm of sun that delight and equated your smooth skin to sunset when the sun is trying to hide It is the colour that brings me a smile It's romantic and like a beautiful dream. birds chatter, "I love you," with a sweet bliss. The color orange is memorable for me, As my lover confessed and endorsed her love to me these memories are associated with sunset; Hence, I shall cherish it forever and ever....

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:50:00 PM
M Asim Nehal, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:25:00 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Much , Maa'm Sara
Date: 3/6/2016 7:49:00 PM
Hi M, Congratulations on you placement in the contest with this dreamy orange write....Vlad.
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thanks much Vladislav
Date: 3/6/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win M Asim
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thanks much Nadya
Date: 3/6/2016 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, M Asim :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:12:00 AM
M Asim, I meant congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Much Laura D...
Date: 3/6/2016 9:13:00 AM
- Asim, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 3/7/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 3/4/2016 7:58:00 PM
this is a really sweet take on orange. I like it a lot.
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thanks much Andrea
Date: 3/4/2016 3:41:00 PM
Asim, this is LOVELY so beautifully penned and I am loving it 7 ~
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 3/5/2016 4:48:00 AM
Thank u so much Dear Linda

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