Obsession

I loved you like an obsession
You stole my thoughts through the air I breathe
Without you I was nothing but dust in the wind 
The dirt in the ground
A person without a shadow 
Music with no sound
But with you I was
A heart with a beat 
The melody so deep in my veins
It ran through my blood like cocaine 
Addicted I was to your smile and your touch 
To the words you say they stuck to my heart
Unbroken this love for you 
 So sick and twisted
Etched in the walls of my heart 
This love will take me to the edge of hell
But with no fear 
I will take u all
Even If it means 
Losing my sanity……

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/20/2012 6:06:00 AM
You definitely describe true love...powerful!!!! Welcome to poetry soup Jasmin...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 8/19/2012 5:32:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Jasmine - You write very good. - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jasmine Mauras
Date: 8/19/2012 2:52:00 PM
thank you so much:)
Date: 8/19/2012 5:23:00 AM
Jasmine I like the internal rhyme, well done..David
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Jasmine Mauras
Date: 8/19/2012 2:53:00 PM
thanks alot i worked really hard on this one :)
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