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Obsession

I loved you like an obsession You stole my thoughts through the air I breathe Without you I was nothing but dust in the wind The dirt in the ground A person without a shadow Music with no sound But with you I was A heart with a beat The melody so deep in my veins It ran through my blood like cocaine Addicted I was to your smile and your touch To the words you say they stuck to my heart Unbroken this love for you So sick and twisted Etched in the walls of my heart This love will take me to the edge of hell But with no fear I will take u all Even If it means Losing my sanity……

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/20/2012 6:06:00 AM
You definitely describe true love...powerful!!!! Welcome to poetry soup Jasmin...regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 8/19/2012 5:32:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Jasmine - You write very good. - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jasmine Mauras
Date: 8/19/2012 2:52:00 PM
thank you so much:)
Date: 8/19/2012 5:23:00 AM
Jasmine I like the internal rhyme, well done..David
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Jasmine Mauras
Date: 8/19/2012 2:53:00 PM
thanks alot i worked really hard on this one :)

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