Obsessed

AGAIN…

I find myself drawn to you and ask myself, WHY?
WHY AM I SO OBSESSED WITH YOU?????

I search my soul, looking for an answer, but none comes. 
There seems to be no rhyme or reason whatsoever for this COMPULSIVE behavior.
Yet!  Knowing this doesn’t seem to stop me. 
It would appear that I have no will of my own. 
Could it be I am possessed?

Yes!  I realize you have never given me reason to think you are interested in me,
 Other than the fact you exist. 
 And when I look at you… you with that blank look on your face
Devoid of any emotion
 IT TURNS ME ON!!!!

I am consumed with thoughts of RAVISHING you
And before I know it…   
I have FORCED myself on you
Covered every inch of your body with my passion
Until…I am totally SPENT.

Afterwards…I feel no remorse for what I have done.
Left you lying there drenched in black sweat…the DNA of my soul
That will surely expose me for who I am….
A WRITER…
Who in a fit of passion…RAVISHED…an EMPTY PAGE

Author:  Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada
Written:  September 9, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/17/2015 3:56:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 7/16/2015 3:29:00 PM
Yes you are very skilled in this form. Check out my poem "Dark Lover" I think you will appreciate it.
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Date: 3/21/2015 5:28:00 PM
ELAINE:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:31:00 PM
ALL RIGHT. I just love a poem that leaves me guessing to the end. You did it with this one, dearie!!!
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Date: 9/11/2014 3:09:00 PM
Wonderfully fulfilling the letting out on paper, eh? This is marvelous, Lainie. You speak of that area of human thought that, for most, is in the'secret' place. I think everyone has that place. Wonderful that it can be let out on paper. Love, daver
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Date: 9/10/2014 8:08:00 PM
Hello Elaine, WOW, obsessed and possessed! Whichever it is, you are well aware of it. OR --Maybe you are infatuated, which can be another similar COMPULSIVE behavior:) I cannot imagine, what goes through your mind... WOW.. Awesome poem, very different ... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:57:00 AM
That's what my husband says too...about my mind that is.lol!!! Thanks fro dropping in, Linda. I love your comments. bfn Lainie
Date: 9/9/2014 6:17:00 PM
Excellent personification I enjoyed this write Elaine:-) Hugs Jan
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Date: 9/10/2014 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. I really appreciate you bringing this to my attention. I thought I had edited this before posting, but apparently...I didn't. Once again, THANK YOU! Love, Lainie
Date: 9/9/2014 11:58:00 AM
- Whether this is compulsive behavior .... obsessed or passion .... I do not know :) ... but very well written, Elaine !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2014 9:28:00 AM
Nie personification, Elaine
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Elaine George
Date: 9/9/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram Lainie
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