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observed

Love is a series of transactions with feelings attached - like receipts

There’s a couple, a cabana away snogging endlessly.
They seem locked in elemental attraction, getting hot.
I think they’re newlyweds - good on them.

Behind my Polarized sun-glasses, I pretend that I’m not watching. Observed passion can be faintly ridiculous - or not. 

I watch the theatrical sea, mostly, but those two are a distraction engine.

Sure, there’s a self-aware cringe to watching them, 
but their obvious heat leaves me pleasantly reeling.

The thoughts and feelings they stir are a jealousy, slow building - tidal, and recursive - a returning surf on a scandalously erotic shore. The inescapable debris of attraction - think modern tidal plastic.

They make me want to reach for sensation 
by processing my envy into action.

I ordered them some champagne and strawberries
They smiled and waved and we toasted them from afar.

I touched Peter’s shoulder, he was reading a book.
“Let’s go upstairs,” I suggested. 
When he looked up and saw my sideways smile, 
he grinned, saying, “Ok.” 

Intimacy arranged, like emotional Venmo
We scrambled up and I took his hand as we crossed the fiery sand.

It’s a totes private beach, we didn’t even have to take our things.
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Songs for this:
fool around by strongboi
22 Durnham Dew by Benny Sings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Fallica Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:52 PM
“I ordered them some champagne and strawberries.” You’re SO VERY thoughtful! I’m wishing I was so inclined when hearing a couple who were testing the springs in their mattress in a room adjacent ours in a cheap dive hotel. / ❤️
Parker Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:33 PM
Vicarious lust, love magnet on speed dial. Slam, bam, ThanQ ma’am. One strawberry and a Bud Light. Ray bans settle.
Vionet Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:22 PM
And THAT was before breakfast 🙃
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