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As mauve of autumn waves her velvet cloak Each treetop, each leaf upturns a glazed hue: That between dusk and morn, the winds evoke A heartbeat tempo of evening’s debut-- Oblivious to chills with beams on oak Parading their grandeur , regal in view, Then once again through October – brushed sky Where Northern lights mindlessly fail to die ! Broken Wings’ Form O- Only One Contest Theme: Oblivious ( 4-syl count) 5/10/2017

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Date: 5/22/2017 8:32:00 AM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/21/2017 3:17:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Nette! Yours is a deserved first place! hugs // paul
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Date: 5/21/2017 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Nette
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Date: 5/21/2017 6:00:00 AM
Wow this is simply amazing! Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/18/2017 4:07:00 PM
Oblivious to chills, but not oblivious to the beauty of this poem, Nette! Also loving the accompanying picture. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/11/2017 4:17:00 PM
Stunning write :)
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Date: 5/9/2017 7:34:00 PM
Elegant write :-)
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Date: 5/9/2017 6:12:00 PM
Oh what a lovely this is. So beautiful, Miss Nette... Hugs :)
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Date: 5/9/2017 4:52:00 PM
The Northern lights enchants the sky just as this poem enchants our psychic eye Nette. Lovely! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/9/2017 2:51:00 PM
On my list to see, Lovely write Nette...
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Date: 5/9/2017 2:31:00 PM
Nette, your beautiful poem brings the colors of autumn on a cool breeze before our eyes. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 5/9/2017 2:07:00 PM
Your theme, your mood created quite a lovely emotion in me. I was likewise oblivious to the cold as the beauty of a season endures more!
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Date: 5/9/2017 1:22:00 PM
Just lovely nette...the northern lights are spectacular
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