Nette Onclaud Poet Ottava rima

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Oblivious To Chills

As mauve of autumn waves her velvet cloak
Each treetop, each leaf upturns a  glazed hue:
That  between dusk and morn, the winds evoke
A  heartbeat tempo of evening’s debut--
Oblivious to chills with  beams on oak
Parading their grandeur , regal in view,
Then once again through October – brushed sky
Where  Northern lights mindlessly fail to die !



Broken Wings’ Form O- Only One Contest
Theme: Oblivious ( 4-syl count)  5/10/2017

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Constance La France May 22, 2017 at 8:32 AM Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem.

Paul Callus May 21, 2017 at 3:17 PM Back with congratulations, Nette! Yours is a deserved first place! hugs // paul

Joseph May May 21, 2017 at 9:57 AM Congrats on a great win Nette

Brian Davey May 21, 2017 at 6:00 AM Wow this is simply amazing! Congrats on your win

Paul Callus May 18, 2017 at 4:07 PM Oblivious to chills, but not oblivious to the beauty of this poem, Nette! Also loving the accompanying picture. Regards & Hugs // paul

Carol B. May 11, 2017 at 4:17 PM Stunning write :)

Eve Roper May 9, 2017 at 7:34 PM Elegant write :-)

Akkina Downing May 9, 2017 at 6:12 PM Oh what a lovely this is. So beautiful, Miss Nette... Hugs :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 9, 2017 at 4:52 PM The Northern lights enchants the sky just as this poem enchants our psychic eye Nette. Lovely! 7 ; )

Charlie Smith May 9, 2017 at 2:51 PM On my list to see, Lovely write Nette...

Chris Green May 9, 2017 at 2:31 PM Nette, your beautiful poem brings the colors of autumn on a cool breeze before our eyes. Best wishes in the contest

Franco Gonza May 9, 2017 at 2:07 PM Your theme, your mood created quite a lovely emotion in me. I was likewise oblivious to the cold as the beauty of a season endures more!

Tim Smith May 9, 2017 at 1:22 PM Just lovely nette...the northern lights are spectacular