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Oblivion’s Comfort

I wake to the desert, talking to the wind; its voice is dry and muffled. Sand cuts my skin as I walk; nowhere feels like a place I belong to. The seeming figs glow like a distant fire. My feet are melting with every step I take. I lose my balance when I stride; I am surprised as the light darkens me. Flames whirl at the edge of my sleep. Dolores remains there, carrying fragments in her hair. She murmurs, "Take care of my loved ones". I turn around, but her stare does not leave me. Water is only a mirage in my eyesight. I watch their tiny faces drowning in silence. I choke my breath as I consume the grime; I confront myself, saying, "They cannot die". They illustrate that the truth awaits at the edge. My fist holds a gun, empty and cold. Comfort lies in lying down and forgetting: where living means losing myself in the unknown.

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