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Succumbing to the allure of lust, she found seduction in betrayal. And acquiesced to hidden desires in love's realistic portrayal. Somewhere within her flirtatious heart, infidelity's seed was planted. And nurtured by hope's high exceptions, happiness was taken for granted. Shunned by all in an uncaring world, her reality supersedes theirs. And with so many sins to forgive, she sort of gave up on God and prayers. A victim of her low self-esteem, she's cried enough tears to fill oceans. And believes only death; can provide sanctuary from such emotions. Oblivion calls compellingly from the fragmented fringes of pain. And pondering thoughts of suicide, she's on the verge of going insane. 5/22/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:10:00 AM
Exploring the depths of a guilt-filled heart. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/23/2015 2:57:00 AM
AMAZING...SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, your encouragement is valued. Emile.
Date: 5/22/2015 9:47:00 AM
True, it's victims of low self esteem who are easily lured and suffer much in this uncaring world. Loved this write. #7....
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Date: 5/22/2015 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, as always your comments are most welcomed. Emile.

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