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Oblivion

To see and yet not see, the world around, As time passes unattained, unadmired, silent. A ghost in a realm that seemed to confound. To which dereliction a truth compliant. Yearning for yearning is a futile dream. While gathered thoughts grow from worthless gardens. Tilled by false promises of self-esteem. Left with lies of invisible pardons. To die in a place where life is barren, And no one understands the crying voice. From rags to bones a cold lifeless carrion Died alone to perish, a beggar's choice. To be an old story that was unheard. Those around never heard a single word. contest Oblivion 12/9/15

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Date: 12/24/2015 10:54:00 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
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Date: 12/23/2015 3:51:00 AM
Greetings Frederick. Congrats for your #2 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:23:00 AM
Frederic, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/19/2015 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations on 1st place win! This poem described utter oblivion to the max... kinda had a lost feeling after reading it. Good job!
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:23:00 PM
FREDERIC, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
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Date: 12/19/2015 12:32:00 PM
congrats on a very fine win, Frederic. AWesome!
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Date: 12/10/2015 3:38:00 PM
this really lends to the feeling of oblivion, Frederic. I especially like the final lines which summarize the theme you portrayed.
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