Oblivion

To see and yet not see, the world around,
As time passes unattained, unadmired, silent.
A ghost in a realm that seemed to confound.
To which dereliction a truth compliant.
Yearning for yearning is a futile dream.
While gathered thoughts grow from worthless gardens.
Tilled by false promises of self-esteem.
Left with lies of invisible pardons.
To die in a place where life is barren,
And no one understands the crying voice.
From rags to bones a cold lifeless carrion
Died alone to perish, a beggar's choice.

To be an old story that was unheard.
Those around never heard a single word.

contest Oblivion
12/9/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
Kimathi Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 3:51 AM
Greetings Frederick. Congrats for your #2 placement in the contest! ;-)
A   Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Frederic, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations on 1st place win! This poem described utter oblivion to the max... kinda had a lost feeling after reading it. Good job!
A  Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 2:23 PM
FREDERIC, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:32 PM
congrats on a very fine win, Frederic. AWesome!
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 3:38 PM
this really lends to the feeling of oblivion, Frederic. I especially like the final lines which summarize the theme you portrayed.
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