Oasis

Obvious desert spots Offer water, but not Only in this place does One quench thirst. We need to Overcome our stress and Obtain peace. Let's hope home Offers us safe haven.

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Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/29/2023 2:11:00 AM

Well written. Enjoy reading this poem. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2023 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Yes, home definitely can be our oasis. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:23:00 AM

Let's hope home Offers us safe haven…yes, we need an oasis in our own backyard! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Andrea :) -

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 11:23:00 PM

Very nicely penned Andrea, Congrats on your win

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/16/2023 4:58:00 PM

so true and lovely, thanks poet, have a sweet sunday

Ann Foster

Date: 9/16/2023 12:04:00 PM

A lovely piece. I enjoyed this. Yes, let us all pray that home ... is safe. Ann

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2023 1:40:00 AM

Indeed we all yearn for a safe haven. Hugs.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 9:32:00 PM

Well written Pleiades, my friend. I could use an Oasis vacation about now. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/14/2023 9:18:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a brilliant take for the Pleiades contest dear.. I love the depth and vividness of this piece in terms of imagery.. So much has been expressed within such few words.. Truly an artistic write! "Let's hope home offers us safe haven" Very heartfelt and evocative! Best of luck for the contest- sending love :)