Oasis

Obvious desert spots
Offer water, but not
Only in this place does
One quench thirst. We need to
Overcome our stress and
Obtain peace. Let's hope home
Offers us safe haven.
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Meadows Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 2:11 AM
Well written. Enjoy reading this poem. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Yes, home definitely can be our oasis. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Let's hope home Offers us safe haven…yes, we need an oasis in our own backyard! Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:14 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Andrea :) -
May Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:23 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea, Congrats on your win
Rolland Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 4:58 PM
so true and lovely, thanks poet, have a sweet sunday
Foster Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:04 PM
A lovely piece. I enjoyed this. Yes, let us all pray that home ... is safe. Ann
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Indeed we all yearn for a safe haven. Hugs.
Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Well written Pleiades, my friend. I could use an Oasis vacation about now. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Sharma  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Oh my, this is such a brilliant take for the Pleiades contest dear.. I love the depth and vividness of this piece in terms of imagery.. So much has been expressed within such few words.. Truly an artistic write! "Let's hope home offers us safe haven" Very heartfelt and evocative! Best of luck for the contest- sending love :)
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