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O, To Be A Cloud

O, to be a cloud and wander the skies untethered, freer than any bird, as free as the wild winds, changing shape endlessly, effortlessly, easing from a stallion to a lion to a bear in the minds of open-eyed children who love the clouds and love to watch the clouds as they dance the sky.... Children and clouds, clouds and children-- a love affair that ends as childhood ends and the once children, now grown-ups can no longer see a living menagerie way, way up high where only the purest hearts may go.

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Date: 7/7/2020 7:01:00 PM
Hey, you nailed what those clouds are -- ever-changing shapes, according to the viewer's imagination... And I must be a child, as yesterday the clouds were a map of Europe for me! Cheers, L.J! :) gw
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/8/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Gershon--good to hear from you, buddy--vaya con Dios siempre!
Date: 7/1/2020 5:17:00 AM
As that great song writer: Winnie the Pooh, said: ‘How sweet to be a cloud, floating in the blue...’ And now the record of my whole life resides in one! nice one, Len. All the best!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/1/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Geoff--I'm glad you like it--it really is truly grand to be a child--God's gift before we have to become adults, I suppose--and may you go with Him in these fraught times, my friend!
Date: 7/1/2020 5:16:00 AM
As that great song writer: Winnie the Pooh, said: ‘How sweet to be a cloud, floating in the blue...’ And now the record of my whole life resides in one! nice one, Len. All the best!
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