John Freeman Poet Rhyme

"o Tangle Webs"

Free Verse Rhyme

O tangle webs began to weave
At once when Eve began to leave
Her Adam heart of sacred start  

From the heart of his male Love expelled 
The meld of soul and mind the male's fe-male
Since then in earth things have not gone well

Cause of mind’s whim sacred light began to dim
The counterfeit mother sought the fig leaf cover
As Adam followed close behind and sought another

O the serpent mind began it’s whine
As strife began to climb it’s twisted vine
Like a mistletoe of sorts, unholy start

O but fields be white with specks of light
The scattered cotton of First Begotten
Though the golden hue be very few

Flesh shall pass on but flowers are gathered
Out of the twisted vines where they be tethered
Twist and turn O vines of wrath writing your own epitaph 

`Tis  by words of life souls remove themselves from strife
O but the city of lights shall be in spite of night
A better state as hate abates with it’s gates

As the inner weave of words in rhyme
Shall resist the bitter twist  of time
Being not of  the twist of carnal mind

Embittered souls make you your peace
For love has provided heaven’s yeast
Accept life by Love’s new lease

From Love your own lease
Go  in bitterness or peace 
`Tis by your own choice... you shall release!

12-6-09 johnmosesfreeman

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Ravindra K Kapoor February 10, 2010 at 9:08 AM A very beautiful Poem showing your deep love for God and its shown path of peace and love. Thanks for this spiritual write. And many thanks for your precious comments on my poems. Best wishes and lover Ravindra...JF

Cecil Hickman January 1, 2010 at 8:50 PM spiritually expressed words that flow gently outward to everyone,,truly enriching and more,,and i want to Thank you again for reading and taking the time to comment,,Blessings..Cecil

Mary Meade Stephenson December 31, 2009 at 4:39 PM Your talent is wonderful Moses and you are a vessel that God is using to spread His message to the masses...I always get such a spiritual lift after reading your writes! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry...many thanks too for your kind words of encouragement...all is truly appreciated! HAPPY NEW YEAR! God Bless~Mary

Ryan Mcneil December 30, 2009 at 10:39 AM hi, thank you for commenting,really appreciate it.brilliant piece here,will definetly be reading the rest of your work.thanks.Ryan

Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 13, 2009 at 10:11 PM Another very interesting poem and you end it with hope, although clearly depending on the choice we make. A very good write, well executed in form and rhyming. By the way, you have soupmail. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 11, 2009 at 8:14 PM Moses.. your comments are so very powerful and so inspiring .. u always bring me back to the God level of life.. I so appreciate your taking the time to do so.. that is true definition of a friend.. thankxxx for your loving comments on my poetry... blessings... luv... "Sweetheart"

Jayne Eggins December 9, 2009 at 10:13 PM Excellent again Moses ... btw just letting you know my poem Collage of Light is all about the constellations seen from our southern skies ... I live in australia so the night we see is totally different to your northern lights ... and thought to write it lol thanks for the thoughtful comment you left as well ... kind regards love Jayne

Sara Kendrick December 8, 2009 at 2:00 PM Interesting topic you have chosen for this write. Keep the creative and descriptive pen flowing. Sara

James Marshall Goff December 7, 2009 at 3:59 PM beautiful treatise on life! John!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 7, 2009 at 11:37 AM Excellent as always Moses from your pen.. a stirring rendition of the Garden of Eden where it all began... Like Carolyn, I, too, choose to go in love and peace... glad u enjoyed my poetry .. and thankxxx for your compliments in your comments... if u want some good reading ... try "Gift for the Ages" by Douglas Ace and yours truly.. just posted by Doug... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Carolyn Devonshire December 6, 2009 at 2:48 PM I choose to go in "peace," Moses. There's a lot of irony in the comparison of the serpent's twisted vine to mistletoe. Sin has been with man from this first moment because lust and love are so often confused. 'Tis a tangled web we weave, is it not, but we must maintain hope that we will find that ultimate peace within heaven's gates. Great work! Love, Carolyn