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O Season of Amber Tulips

O season of amber tulips, of yellow daffodils, Of grinning verdant prairies, of cheery hills, Of giggling, burbling streams rushing to seas, Of fragrant breeze rustling passions of trees; How scintillating is the glance of your smile, O grandeur of beauty, how jovial is your style! O vibrance of growth, of avid nascent moods, Emerging anew boasting budding attitudes, Stimulating twigs of maple, oak, sycamore, Preening aura of leaves now brought to fore; How rhythmically you sway melodies of spring Attuning to love themes, fervid robins sing. O inspiring season, how you thrill meadow, Reviving glee, from demise of wintry throe As vibes of romance in mating songs tiptoe Echoing birds’ frolic, rekindling barren knoll, Nesting in realms memories of yore cajole, Where chirps of hatchlings your glory extol. O season colorful, abloom in showy flowers, How gaily you tap-dance with April showers Buoying ardent dreams of bees, butterflies, Luring spirits romantic of daydreaming eyes Fixated mirthfully on picturesque springtime Lauding in awe of your magnificence sublime. February 25, 2023 Placed 2nd: In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 10/20/2023 7:41:00 AM
This poem left my heart full dear Vijay, i can say proudly, that you are one of my fave poets here on soup, because of the way you weave imagery and paint thoughts with artistic and imaginative words in such eloquence! I dont even know where to begin praising this but i must say “ Of giggling, burbling streams rushing to seas, Of fragrant breeze rustling passions of trees;“ really stood out for men im going to add this to my list of faves! You truly are an inspiration
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Date: 9/5/2023 6:46:00 PM
I love it when poetry rhymes and give a picture.
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Date: 6/8/2023 11:59:00 AM
Gorgeously conveyed poem, which thrills the senses! :)
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Date: 4/15/2023 7:55:00 PM
Beautiful spring display you have for us Vijay!
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Date: 3/13/2023 7:25:00 PM
Beautiful Vijay! I can visualize all the joy!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2023 6:40:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Kim--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/10/2023 11:35:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Vijay. It's exquisite in its use of personification and imagery, and just a splendid, uplifting, thrilling, even dazzling piece! Must add to my faves : )
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Date: 3/14/2023 6:39:00 AM
Glad to see you back on Soup, HT. I am thrilled by your presence on my page and delighted by your generous feedback. Many thanks my friend. Special thanks for the FAVE.
Date: 3/8/2023 10:39:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your win! Your words make me feel like dancing over "cherry hills" with bees and butterflies singing the praises of this sublime season. Wonderfully written with your signature imagery. Sending you blessings of springtime joy!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2023 6:37:00 AM
So very kind of you, Sam. Much appreciate your generous remarks--many thanks.
Date: 3/8/2023 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2023 6:36:00 AM
Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks, Heidi.
Date: 3/7/2023 8:40:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A creative write.  I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day...............
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2023 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Date: 3/6/2023 6:20:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning placement, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2023 6:35:00 AM
Many thanks, Lasaad. Much appreciate.
Date: 3/6/2023 3:44:00 PM
Lovely ode to Spring Vijay. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2023 6:35:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Linda--much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 3/3/2023 6:46:00 AM
Reading this, Vijay, puts one on a wave of nostalgic days from many years ago. Yes takes me back to the lovely countryside of my birth. Harry
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:35:00 PM
So glad to hear that, Harry. Your birth place sounds so beautiful. Sending you good wishes for continued good health. Many thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/2/2023 8:09:00 PM
Oh Vijay, this poem is filled with vivid color, movement and sound, just lifting my heart! Lovely!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:34:00 PM
Much appreciate, BJ-many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 3/1/2023 3:56:00 PM
Only through daydreaming eyes can one visualize such beauty and live through it lol, thank you for turning my computer screen into a floral beauty, :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2023 12:33:00 PM
So glad to read your kind remarks, Vienna. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks my friend.
Date: 2/27/2023 2:14:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant writing, Vijay. Wonderful imagery as usual. Best wishes in the contest...good vibes, my friend. ~Charlie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2023 6:23:00 AM
So very kind of you Charlie. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks.
Date: 2/27/2023 12:17:00 PM
Great verse, Vijay, full of colored imagery and feelings. Always a great write. Great Blessings my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2023 6:22:00 AM
So nice to hear that from you, Eve. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 2/27/2023 11:28:00 AM
Vijay, you've penned another magnificent beauty! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 2/26/2023 7:57:00 PM
Although spring gives me the worst of allergies, but your delightful image of spring just made me looked outside and only to be greeted by naked trees Lol. Ahhh, Vijay, you just gave us something beautiful to look forward to. The spring of life. Breathtaking poem, my friend :) I’m favoring this so that I can read it next Sunday visit :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2023 10:17:00 AM
The trees are budding tiny colorful leaves here, but still cold. Glad you liked the poem, Fin. Always a delight when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback and your FAVE. Thank you for your presence on my page.
Date: 2/26/2023 7:39:00 PM
"O season colorful, abloom in showy flowers, How gaily you tap-dance with April showers".....Love these lines. I feel the color and beauty of spring all through your poem. Another fantastic poem, dear Vijay ! All the Best.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2023 10:12:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Valsa. Always thrilled to hear from you my friend. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 2/26/2023 5:36:00 PM
What a marvelous poetic hymn of spring's coming, my dearest friend, Vijay. A fave! Be blessed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2023 10:13:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem my friend. So special to receive your kind feedback and your FAVE. Many thanks, Demetrios.
Date: 2/26/2023 1:53:00 PM
- It's almost like I want to open all the windows and doors to let the spring in, Vijay - (but only + 3 degrees - and cold wind) - Beautifully written - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2023 10:11:00 AM
So true--it's cold here too, but this winter has been rather warm relatively speaking. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.
Date: 2/26/2023 10:36:00 AM
You have painted such a beautiful picture that now I long for spring in all its glory Vijay. Thank you for always smiling up my days with your blooming poetry :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/26/2023 12:04:00 PM
Much appreciate, Vienna. Many thanks.
Date: 2/26/2023 10:07:00 AM
So colorful and vibrant with images of spring.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/26/2023 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 2/26/2023 5:11:00 AM
Now. This is an amazing well written poem! I love it. And the tip toe and Tap dance. Wow! A Fave for me!!!! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/26/2023 7:15:00 AM
So wonderful to hear your insights my friend. I am glad that you liked the poem, Heidi. Can never thank you enough for your continued supportive comments. Honored by your FAVE. Many thanks, as always, for being there.
Date: 2/26/2023 5:06:00 AM
Wonderful poetry on the flowers that brighten up the earth and make it a more beautiful place. Dear friend, Vijay, you have done a wonderful job of capturing the beauty of spring, which is a spectacular season. The joy and energy that comes with springtime may be seen here, in a striking metaphorical way. Best wishes for the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/26/2023 7:12:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to write detailed comments, my friend. You always shine on my page with your cheer. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Lasaad.
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