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O Mysterious Sea...

O mysterious sea...as light as the eyes of my faithful sweet-heart, inspire the distant soul of this poet in distraught... whose poem is still unfinished; give him the rhythm and flow to embellish his heart-felt verse with sentiment and thoughtfulness! Beyond the rolling waves, ships carry secret lovers who deride and defy their fate and set their souls on fire... without feeling a need in dire, or admitting an awful mistake! O mysterious sea... take their ship away to a shore where nobody will see, and let their fornication be as crude as the awakening of everyone who's not afraid of indulging; I will take no part or joy in their pleasure so openly and willingly! Could I forget that she ever existed, or ever loved me with trust and sweetness? Wouldn't it be unforgivable and wrong... to waste what was blessed by holiness? In this era of unfaithfulness, many choose to do harm to someone else... thinking only of self-gratification, breaking the vows of dedication! O mysterious sea as deep as the love of my changeless woman, who contemplates every sunset and dawn with the purity of a dove: let no beautiful eyes deceive me, and sadly erase the innocence of her memory!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 4:46:00 AM
Andrew - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:55:00 PM
Andrew - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Andrew. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2008 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on this one finally being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/1/2008 7:57:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week - Amazing story - God Bless
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Date: 8/31/2008 8:55:00 PM
Interesting story in poetry form. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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