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O Love

You tend to ostracize the apparition setting the real culprit free. It does not matter to pretend now, a damaged house has become a burden. Who was playing the enmity card ? Hammered, eyes wide open I start documenting the deceit of a parrot flower. Your past had become the shackles, not the road map of family. An enormous hate was buried in your trees. O death-trap, the bees will not come to your flowers. Your gifts are lying around me unattended. I will ask no more any pardon. The moon has walked away. My sky was unanswerable. The theater will play another star-crossed brand names. Satish Verma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/26/2009 10:03:00 AM
This is how I feel sometimes- after my beloved shattered my heart. Nevertheless, this is so breath-takingly beautiful. Your gift is astonishing. Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/26/2009 8:50:00 AM
much metaphor and simile in this wounded write. Well done Satish. --_Robert
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Date: 12/26/2009 4:41:00 AM
This poem speaks to me saying your feelings and posssibly others have been poisened toward this individual. "Gifts unattended" "Bees will not come to your flowers" Very creative write.
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Date: 12/26/2009 3:54:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Second stanza like the line "Your gifts are lying around me unattended". Don't exactly know what you mean by the lines but I could go several ways with it. Sara
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