o lord, hear me

Lord, hear my prayer,
Get me rid of my diabetes,
listen to the little birds,
Who sing when the street lamps light up,
listen to the tram driver,
which carries so many people incapable of loving,
hear my prayer, Lord,
listen to the high school girls who make up
Before solving equations,
Get rid of the young drivers
Whose testosterone holds the wheel,
Get rid of people who ignore the slowness,
Offer me sunsets in Australia,
Lord, hear my prayer,
and my day will be better.

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Date: 1/22/2025 9:16:00 PM
Diabetes is spreading rampant among many. I have been on the verge of diabetes for many years. But through strict diet, it hasn't grown into a state of forcing me to have medication. I am sorry for you. May God hear all your prayers and give you sound health.
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Date: 1/18/2025 9:50:00 AM
I have diabetes and several other illness.. I hope God hears your prayer..
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Date: 1/18/2025 7:01:00 AM
Diabetes, yes, many of us have it…I felt wretched when I first found out. May God bless us with low numbers, keep us healthy, in Jesus mighty name. Hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/18/2025 9:01:00 AM
thank you so much Kim, for the comment, and the empathy, does it mean you are also a victim, take care, and hope yann
Date: 1/18/2025 6:59:00 AM
In your unique style, you pray to the Lord! … Before solving equations… Whose testosterone holds the wheel…people who ignore the slowness, I am thinking of pace, yes…let us slow down, meditate on God’s beauty and grace. Fave for me, dear one!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/18/2025 9:06:00 AM
thank you so much Kim, for the supportive comment and friendly remarks, enjoyed best wishes
Date: 1/18/2025 2:09:00 AM
Yann, don't let diabetes get you down. Is it type 2 diabetes? My husband and I both are type 2 diabetics. His is worse than mine. We both have neuropathy with his being worse than mine. Sometimes those fast drivers can be scary but the young have faster reflexes. Sara K
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/18/2025 9:04:00 AM
i feel so sorry Sara for you and your loving one, wish there will be some good news in the next years for therapy ( i heard some last year) your comment is moving sincerely, take care and enjoy your week end blessings
Date: 1/17/2025 9:16:00 AM
He hears your every prayer night and day and he will guide you back to health dear Yann, as long as you do your part, and know that he is there for you always
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/17/2025 4:04:00 PM
thank you so much, i promise will do my "part", thanks for the supportive words Rose, enjoyed
Date: 1/17/2025 12:10:00 AM
I sometimes ponder what destiny put me in to such chronic situations but have no alternative than working hard to avert and manage the situations Nice poem.Wish you the best
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/17/2025 4:07:00 PM
thanks a lot Akhamm, better prevent it, if only i had knew take care
Date: 1/16/2025 8:07:00 PM
I am diabetic too. Your poem is beautiful.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/17/2025 4:06:00 PM
thank you so much paige, take care , i think we can cure sometimes ( i heard 5%) blessings
Date: 1/16/2025 5:16:00 PM
I hope soon God will grant your wish for healing or a cure. Hugs
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Date: 1/16/2025 3:18:00 PM
In light of all the modern medical advances, I keep hoping that one day there will be breakthrough cures for cancer, diabetes and other diseases. Your prayer is beautiful, Yann. I hope it is answered.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/16/2025 4:58:00 PM
thanks evelyn, there is still hope with medecine and science, for now i have to care principally about what i eat, every day is a challenge for me, thanks for your support
Date: 1/16/2025 8:33:00 AM
I believe you can get rid of diabetes 2 by simply changing the way you eat, radically. Sorry if you have diabetes 1. My husband has had diabetes 2 for 15 years, but he has kept it borderline by using metformin. Good luck to you. Your prayer about the guys out of control at the wheel. Let's pray they cut it the heck out!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/18/2025 1:24:00 PM
just hang in there. My husband is so addicted to sweets and he has been borderline for diabetes 2 just by taking metformin. It's one of the few drugs out there that is really beneficial!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/16/2025 5:02:00 PM
thank you so much andrea, for offering hope, it is "garbage" food that gave me diabete 2 also, with caring my food i progress slowly too, this maladie has deep consequences, i am afraid of that, thanks for you support , it means something
Date: 1/16/2025 6:23:00 AM
I understand and feel your sincere and heartfelt prayer to God, i hope and pray the same for you and also i really wish illnesses such as diabetes etc do not exist! Sigh! Love how you mentioned sunsets in australia. Sending you light always and prayers for better days ahead
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/16/2025 5:05:00 PM
in french we say " aide toi et le ciel t'aidera" i think that with food i can cure something, but it is a difficult challenge every day, temptations are so fast and numerous, thanks for your beautiful comment
Date: 1/16/2025 5:46:00 AM
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Date: 1/16/2025 5:41:00 AM
Amen Yann, I agree with Anne-Lise.) May a new And better day dawn.!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/16/2025 5:06:00 PM
thanks Joe, for stopping by, kindly, prayers are not enough, i must help myself too, but that is inspiration for that
Date: 1/16/2025 2:14:00 AM
- May your prayer be heard, Yann - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/16/2025 5:06:00 PM
thanks a lot anne lise, blessings
Date: 1/16/2025 2:00:00 AM
I have diabetes two, so I have come to hate food. Green vegetables and little meat. No desserts. But your poem is great observation. Loved Get rid of the young drivers Whose testosterone holds the wheel. We have too many overspeeding deaths in Malta.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 1/16/2025 5:10:00 PM
thanks victor, sorry for your diabetes, i can relate to vegetables too, this is so important for helping myself, but it is also psychological, i like my cheese with red wine, i will do efforts next thanks for your beautiful comment
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