O, Light

~ Oh, maiden of light cracks the wispy air open , wandering around viscous spaces like virgin shadow caressing the edge of sleep… and the days stretch longer, taller than guava trees dreamingly shedding laces of northeast streams when songbirds, orbits, and a pageant of flowers listen to a single humming breeze… and when all else is sprawled quiet, waterfalls marry her certain lingering star straying on mouths of gentleness past eons bound by nuptials in iridescent realms…
*O, ilaw, sa gabing malamig, wangis mo'y bituin sa langit… O, tanglaw, sa gabing tahimik, larawan mo, Neneng, nagbigay pasakit. Ay! *
Somehow ,curlicues drape a fragrant smoke leaking out a folk sky; dancing in the mirror of the mountain pool… a serenade weeps; quivering, moaning along the inland pass that someone said morning becomes electra, that learning how to hear her blossom or pearl stone unravels the very skin from which it was born is allowing time to shed her purity far beyond unknowing a water’s need to keep still: the juice spills…
**Gising at magbangon sa pagkagupiling sa pagkakatulog na lubhang mahimbing; buksan ang bintana at ako'y dungawin, nang mapagtanto mo ang tunay kong pagdaing. * *
Peeling new faces of time, shaping the width of endless rhyme in sprays of endless mystery... like so, a thousand times before and after, twilight and daybreak entwine… oh,light elusive, passing through calm eyes of young maiden’s season is love’s way of coming back to itself. ~ -------- * O, light, in the cold night; you're like a star in the sky O, light, in the quiet night, your picture, Neneng, makes one ache…. Oh! ** Awake and arise from slumber, from your sleep so deep. Open your window and look out to me So that you may understand my true lament. ~ this poem is inspired by a harana, a traditional Filipino serenade. The suitor is accompanied by his friends who back him up both vocally. At first, the woman's window is closed. The man calls out to her and if she's interested, she'll open her window. Singing harana originated during the Spanish colonial period in the Philippines.~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYueJU0Ufws&feature=related --------- For Debbie’s Bi-lingual Poetry by nette onclaud
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Austin Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Thanks for this island rhapsody. Congrats. Love, daver
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 11:30 AM
NETTE, , Congratulations, with your awesome entry in DEBBIE'S Bi-Lingual Poetry CONTEST.. All these entries were fun to read.. thank you for the entertainment, ta ta ~PD
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August 31, 2012 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your win! Thanks for your kind comment on my poem.
Mac Donald Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Nette! The words are enhanced by your powerful imagery. Best wishes, Mikki
Liwayway Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations!!! you are a great writer Nette..hand salute!! :)
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bi-Lingual Poetry" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 9:11 AM
I could hear this set to beautiful music. Awesome this is, Nette!
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August 30, 2012 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on another worthy win nette this is lovely xx
Grisetti Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 9:57 PM
A romantic seranade - just lovely. Congratulations.
Aldea Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Congrats Nette... sana meron pa rin ganito sa bagong henerasyon... :) Love it! Take care, Cheryl
Guzzi Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 7:19 PM
Thank YOU for sharing your traditions and your language with us. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 10:19 AM
I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Nette. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol
Sivey Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Oh wow, Nette, this is surely one of your best songs! I believe I've read a couple of your other songs and this one competes highly amongst them my friend! I love the second stanza, it's very well written, I really do love it! The feel of your write is incredible, what an awesome train of through! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Educational and creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
Mac Donald Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 6:14 AM
This is beautifully composed Nette! "Singing 'harana'" sounds like a romantic way to court a woman. I've just listened to the music, his voice sounds so soulful.:) A winner for sure in Debs contest!! Mine sounds more like a translation than a poem..duh :) Hugs...Mikki
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August 8, 2012 at 5:20 AM
A beautiful song Nette.....it only goes one way: up,up and up - and your heart are full of love and caring...always. - Have a lovely day. - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :)
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