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Nymphs On Midday Protest - Five Lines

NYMPHS ON MIDDAY PROTEST


Crystal nymphs frolic at day-spring
Unto puffs, upon hush of blossom breast
sliding and gliding like dangling strings
Chilling the fever of midday protest
soft-sweet rest as all sleeps at their nest
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Sponsor	Sara Kendrick
Contest Name	Five Lines/ Metaphors And Simile
++Placed 1st++

O.E. Guillermo
9:20 pm, June 22, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Verlena S. Walker Date: 7/2/2015 8:47:00 PM Congratulations on a fine win Olive. Verlena Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/15/2015 12:26:00 AM Thank you Verlena...

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/1/2015 9:47:00 PM Dear Olive, congrats on this top of the line win! Beautiful! Pandita Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/15/2015 12:18:00 AM Thank you Pandita..

Skat A Date: 6/30/2015 10:50:00 PM Olive, Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT** Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/6/2015 8:18:00 AM Thank you Skat.. hugs!

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/30/2015 8:13:00 AM I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 3:48:00 AM thank you Sara.. =)! God bless..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/29/2015 10:23:00 PM Congratulations on this gem, Olive! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 3:01:00 AM thanks much Andie.. =)!

Eve Roper Date: 6/29/2015 6:45:00 PM Olive, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/1/2015 9:00:00 AM Thank you Eve... =) COngratz too.. =)

Kp Nunez Date: 6/26/2015 1:18:00 AM Lovely metaphors in this quintain, Olive. Yes, pinay! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/30/2015 10:37:00 PM Thanks much Kim.. :D! Appear!!! :D!

James Fraser Date: 6/25/2015 2:18:00 PM A little Gem by the little One, nice Quintain Olive. Hope your free to write a collab soon, hugs//James xxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/30/2015 8:39:00 AM :D!! Yes let's do soon James.. Tell me the theme.. And let me get my muse working and digesting.. :P! thanks much ..

Gary Bateman Date: 6/24/2015 4:31:00 AM Hello Olive!! This Quintain is very beautiful indeed. I really like your choice of "Crystal Nymphs" for this poem. The imagery and the "ababb" rhyming sequence are perfect!! A "7" and I will FAV this since I really like nymphs, fairies, and leprechauns!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/30/2015 8:30:00 AM HI Gary thank you for your kind generous comments..=) dewdrops fascinate me and so are fairies.. they remind me of youth and freshness... =)~ Olive Eloisa

Paul Callus Date: 6/23/2015 9:13:00 AM Hi Olive_eloi:) You might not have been writing much lately, but you have lost none of your poetic touch! Five delightful lines! gl in contest. hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/30/2015 8:27:00 AM Ho Paul thank you for reading and leaving a comment.. =) these just the times I am having much more time... I got so many thoughts and so i just type them in and they are waiting to be finished.. :D! hugs back!

Afolabi Muideen Date: 6/23/2015 8:23:00 AM Intrigue piece,excellent..........good luck in the contest..........A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 1:05:00 AM thank you. :D!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/23/2015 7:35:00 AM Fivetastic Olive, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 1:04:00 AM Thank you so much with your fantastic comment.. :D!

Milton Robertson Date: 6/23/2015 7:10:00 AM Olive, you do lovely work. It's purely Captivating. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 1:03:00 AM thanks much Milton.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/22/2015 8:20:00 PM Oh Olive you are in Indonesia do you know of the Bajou laut? Light & Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 1:00:00 AM thanks much Debbie..=)

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/22/2015 1:36:00 PM how intricately done, eloi... love it!.. you still in nueva?.. miss ya!.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/23/2015 3:39:00 PM ThAnk you Nette.. Yes am still in Nueva... hugs too..=)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/22/2015 1:14:00 PM - Olive, five really beautiful lines! (7) - Good luck in the contest !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/23/2015 1:10:00 PM Thanks much Annr Lise. =) hugs!

John Fleming Date: 6/22/2015 12:31:00 PM I find this all rather charming - nicely done, Olive. My very best regards! :) john. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/23/2015 1:09:00 PM Thanks much.. :)! Im glad you dropped by.. I find your poems beautiful too.. :)!

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 6/22/2015 10:50:00 AM Just beautiful Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/23/2015 5:01:00 AM Thanks much Njeri..=)

Casarah Nance Date: 6/22/2015 8:41:00 AM Five lines of beautiful descriptions! Awesome girl :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/22/2015 9:07:00 PM Cassie thank you so much.. =) glad you like it.. =) ~Olive Eloisa =)