Nwankwo Precious

Now I have a poetess student
Who amazes me with her endowment
A great dream she craves, for attainment
Now, a mature girl with great excitement
Knitter! In thy lines an adorable adornment
Whao! My sight is glued to that embellishment
Oh! I vividly  see the imminent accomplishment

Poised with thy pen, enjoying each poetic moment
Relishing the prospect of making real thy intent
Each line of this budding poetess, an ornament
Crafted dexterously, each glowing content
I'm lost baby,in that rhythmic movement
Outstanding, thy skills in each segment
Underway, I see thy self- fulfilment
See each line like fluorescent



Each line of the poem is dedicated to my beloved student, Nwankwo Precious.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/19/2019 8:02:00 AM

What a lovely dedication. It is rare to witness such a blossoming of spirit. Being a teacher is a great privilege.

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/7/2018 7:12:00 PM

All these words come alive, transcend the novel and catapult the reader into a realm of sensory delight. Such a pleasure to read these words. Your accomplishment is no longer imminent.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/8/2018 2:17:00 PM

Dear Mark, your kind words and the way you brandish lines with dexterity are therapeutic to the souls of poetry lovers. Much love, Adeniji.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/6/2018 4:10:00 AM

Impressive writing dear, Adeniji Please, check definition of acrostic!

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/6/2018 5:14:00 AM

Thank you dear friend Demetrios. The initial title was peculiarly foregrounded. I appreciate your constructive observation which has been carried out. Much love, Adeniji