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Nuts Over a Coconut

Fell in love with a coconut The tree stood tall outside my hut Love sublime at first sight I thought I‘d have a bite Lost both front teeth right on the spot AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on January 17, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/18/2019 9:53:00 PM

So so funny! Love it a FAV for me. Thank you for writing it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 11:18:00 PM

LOL thank you so much for the lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/18/2019 8:02:00 AM

That must have really cheesed you off - two front teeth for a bite of coconut - expensive visit to the dentist! Is this limerick true? Poetry wishes, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 12:53:00 PM

LOL - no coconuts were injured in the making of this limerick... nor any teeth. Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/17/2019 12:53:00 PM

Haha, there's only one way into a coconut, a sledgehammer comes to mind. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/17/2019 2:15:00 PM

So... not strong teeth? LOL

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2019 11:26:00 AM

Ouch but, a funny Limerick, as well. I do love coconut but, my preference is the inside meat. Well penned.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/17/2019 2:15:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.