Line Gauthier Poet Limerick

Nuts Over a Coconut

Fell in love with a coconut
The tree stood tall outside my hut
Love sublime at first sight
I thought I‘d have a bite
Lost both front teeth right on the spot



AP: 3rd place 2020

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Timothy Mcguire January 18, 2019 at 9:53 PM So so funny! Love it a FAV for me. Thank you for writing it. Line Gauthier January 18, 2019 at 11:18 PM LOL thank you so much for the lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.

Jennifer Proxenos January 18, 2019 at 8:02 AM That must have really cheesed you off - two front teeth for a bite of coconut - expensive visit to the dentist! Is this limerick true? Poetry wishes, Jennifer. Line Gauthier January 18, 2019 at 12:53 PM LOL - no coconuts were injured in the making of this limerick... nor any teeth. Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham January 17, 2019 at 12:53 PM Haha, there's only one way into a coconut, a sledgehammer comes to mind. Tom. Line Gauthier January 17, 2019 at 2:15 PM So... not strong teeth? LOL

M. L. Kiser January 17, 2019 at 11:26 AM Ouch but, a funny Limerick, as well. I do love coconut but, my preference is the inside meat. Well penned. Line Gauthier January 17, 2019 at 2:15 PM LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.