Numb

Giving anything just to feel something
numbness from depression is worse than pain
my body's gone numb, away from life's sting
i've gone numb from a shot of nova cane.
with a smile i put my fears to the test
just taking a chance, waltzing on thin air
go diving in without holding my breath
i would not have jumped in if you were there.
from my depression comes the apathy
my blood flow stops and haults the healing
inside your eyes i see the empathy
but it is meaningless without feeling.
i see your face and it seems unreal
i then remember what is like to feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Interesting way that you presented your topic of love loss...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Amanda. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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