Nudge Nudge Wink Wink

They sit in the long grass
Cuddled up to smooch
She smiles at him sweetly’ saying
You can look but not touch

He looks so dejected 
That’s not what he wants
He is hungry inside
His breath comes in short pants

He tries to coax her
With a nibble on her ear
But she’s having none of it
He’s going without, I fear.

Bet your minds are a quiver
Nudge  nudge  wink  wink
But it’s only the sandwiches
He’s after 
                I Think???
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Humor Me" contest Seren. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 2:34 PM
Seren, thank you for the smile... congratulations with your poem... always~ :-) PD
Roberts Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 3:04 PM
thats what its all about PD, to make people smile and forget their worries ...Seren
Eastman Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 10:54 AM
LOL... Congratlations on the win. Great piece of work... This was a very enjoyable contest to read.
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Carol ...Seren
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 10:07 AM
hahaha, nudge nudge wink wink. What a cute title for it too. congrats on your win. this was darling.
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:41 AM
I am useless at titles Andrea .. Glad it worked this time..Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Big congratulations here my friend well done love it , were you by that river? nudge nudge wink wink lol xx ps will try and sort a piccy tomorrow.
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:43 AM
of course hic hic, lol thanks Mandy .... Seren
May Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:59 AM
congrats on your win Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Joseph
Guzzi Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:38 AM
LOL so cute and yes you did get me! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:56 AM
thanks Debbie ....Seren
Nair Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 2:59 AM
Congrats on the 1st place, hilarious write!! Jag
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 4:49 AM
Thanks Jag bet you thoughtit would end differently lol ....Seren
Liwayway Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 10:34 PM
a grand winner indeed!! you make me laugh..I thought differently hahahah..Big congratulations friend Seren on your win!! cheers!!!!!! Love, Maria
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 4:47 AM
LOL so did I when I wrote it, had to keep it clean though....Seren
West Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 10:33 PM
Congrats Seren on your 1st place. A great write. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 4:47 AM
Thank you Rollo ...Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 10:21 PM
congrats on your first place win in the contest Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 4:46 AM
Thank you francine....Seren
Reynolds Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Good piece. Very cute.
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Thank you Brittany
Ellison Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 6:55 AM
Great big cackle here... loved it! Loved the visual of your breath in 'short pants'! LOL Fun stuff... love and big squeezy hugs, Jack
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 6:19 PM
lol Jack thanks for the hug
Horsman Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 5:21 AM
Oh you are a killjoy, Seren, but a excellent poem....
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 6:20 PM
Well Harry it would have been banned if I had carried on lol. Thanks for the comment.
Smith Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 4:55 AM
Nice work! Gave me a giggle! :D
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 6:21 PM
thaks for stopping by. Seren
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