Noxious Guttural Humps

Written: January 10, 2025 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The stillness separates us — quivering quietly akin to the cusp of daybreak when whispers wane — it can be truly guttural and rugged ~ and dark and moving and galling all at the same time and only windows to the soul shine ~ mirrors manifesting mysteries omitted, A panorama portrayed in pale pigments — Fierce fervor forges fissures across our souls. In corridors, of conflict, I carefully continue lonesome — I can hear the clinking of the swords ~ and the low, guttural growl of commands Furious flames flicker at my feet, with searing scars simmering ~ silently beneath the surface — fires that flicker and fiddle. There are times when hope shines — steadfast, akin to a beacon breaking through misty midnight — a whisper where whimseys wander and warmth weaves ~ Even amid the echoes of vacuum, raw life springs forth. Augury quivers quietly akin to quivering quills — in autumn's crisp, cool currents ~ palms perspire, burdened by the weight of bottled-up bitterness, and heart races hammering ~ with a hurried heartbeat— Syncopated sighs seeking sense. But then, a halcyon discovery dawns— a child's chuckle cascading through time tapestry. The first flower blooms after a frigid frost— marking times when ~ zest vivaciously returns. Thus, we find ourselves in this delicate cobweb of emotions — where heartfelt shades of hardship and happiness harmoniously intertwined— Each emotion is an earnest echo, eagerly seeking expression.

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Date: 1/11/2025 12:34:00 PM
How did no one comment on this? It's absolutely beautiful, Sotto. Your tone is so so meaningful.
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