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Now Your Love, Dwells There In Hellish and Lost Dreams

Now Your Love, Dwells There In Hellish And Lost Dreams Deep the cold at foot of our abandoned bed where roses wilt, praying early frost to die Green-eyed monster laughing loud to be fed your new "friends" gladly providing the lie No pleasure in revealing this most foul deed no solace in showing past pain in new light Was too late once you took on the bad seed turning once bright day into darkest night What of fantastic past joys we had both shared morns wrapped in warm bodies refusing to rise In darkness, my soul and heart was ensnared took years to recover from that surprise. Now your love, dwells there in hellish and lost dreams My spirit glows in relief, in love's true streams. R.J. Lindley, Sept 12th 1976 Sonnet, 11 on 10.... Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 11 11 10 10 11 11 10 10 0 11 11 10 10 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 148 Total # Lines: 16 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 116 New Note( the old note and its cursing deleted)- These decades later the powerful dream still comes attempting to haunt. I wake with a smile knowing I survived and eventually prospered...

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Date: 12/17/2017 10:35:00 AM
Nicely done, Robert, I love the poem, "Recollections of a condemned man" - collaboration with Silent One.. it was amazing Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/12/2016 8:46:00 AM
A well deserved win Robert. Congrats.
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Date: 9/8/2016 10:59:00 AM
Robert, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Tonight I will Write" and enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/7/2016 8:45:00 PM
So beautiful in the story telling and classical form. I find the syllable count is much easier to manipulate in couplet rhyme scheme than in classical sonnet too. However, the challenge of the classical is intellectually more satisfying. The Maths are far more difficult and it seems to read with a more musical cadence (in my opinion). I end up poking the words with a stick for those silly Bulls! Huh! This is delightful and so well done! THIS GETS THE SEVEN!
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Date: 5/6/2016 1:55:00 AM
great sonnet Robert, enjoyed this one, thank you for sharing ~~XOX SKAT
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:15:00 AM
Hi Rob.... thanks for checking out my poem. this one is fantastic. The betrayal is so brutally felt. "no solace in showing past pain new light" should be the title of a movie. Congrats on your awards
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