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Now, Don'T Look...

Making one hundred calls to get trimmer,
taking each diet pill to stay slimmer.
they tighten my flesh,
so each fold will mesh.
Here I come! Hit the light switch to dimmer!

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/14/2010 4:03:00 AM

funny read on a rainy afternoon, enjoyed :) - rgds WN

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/27/2010 11:47:00 AM

Congrats on your HM in the contest. Dan C

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2010 6:14:00 PM

Congratulations Gerard, on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2010 6:13:00 PM

Congratulations Gerard, on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2010 12:58:00 PM

Congrats Gerard on your HM in the Bulge contest with this super write.. enjoy a great honor ..my dear friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Date: 5/24/2010 4:45:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. What a day brightener. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2010 7:58:00 AM

Gerard this is unique and original and your wit shows so well my friend... good luck in the contest... my entry is Bulge to Beauty... and appreciate your gracious and sweet comments always to the "Sweetheart"... very much appreciated and luv your contest entry as ADAM.. good luck.... hope u will choose an EVE from Deb's contest for extra consideration... I think u can choose me as the sponsor too...hint hint hint..haha.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"