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Momentous feats out of ridiculous claims, the people are right and we should be ashamed Masking the most important questions, by overlapping with vile suggestions Congestion, is filling up the streets and soon it will flood the halls and fill up their seats When will they see that we bleed the same? When we carve our brother's heart out, just to see the stains

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Daniel Whitson

Date: 8/17/2016 1:25:00 PM

I appreciate feedback! :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:19:00 AM

Daniel, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 12:58:00 AM

Daniel, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Daniel Whitson
Date: 7/15/2016 2:29:00 PM

Appreciate it SKAT, Love getting feedback and reading the work of others.

Robert Heemstra

Date: 7/14/2016 2:40:00 PM

There's a lot prejudices which leads to hate and mistrust, and not an ounce of it is justified!