Novice Fisherman

Grandpa gives kerchief
novice fisherman
catfish pierced hand
the years grimace and grin
for a lesson infused

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/18/2011 11:16:00 AM
A good lesson for him too! Nice seeing you today, Lisa.
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:43:00 PM
Lisa, haiku and senryu poems are limited to three lines and seventeen syllables. Add another line with up to seven syllables, and you will have a good tanka.
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