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The floor was carpeted with wonderful trees, stomped and storm-clawed leaves they arise again as specks of magic dust fire starts from ash on the eyelashes air-blazing amid the fall haze. The flakes were light and shimmering I delight on snow-covered roadways leaf, branch, and body ripen in spring now I can relax in the pristine snow burying the wreckage after a fatal fall. The snow was softly pelted by the rain white crispy flakes gradually melted below the softer, warmer raindrops grass that had browned. I spin heavenly songs in the universe I am a classic song in the art a tawny friend, lament for your sight our blood's delight of rage can you discern the flow? Weaving our way through the mist, we become gnawed trees a smorgasbord of a busy spiritual realm snowflakes are created when rolling November's ice storm. The breezes freeze in November the cold seeps into the bones as winter approached, the sky was dark hollowed trees show the passage of time the window shows a blank space there is a man here, unnamed when the window is shut, petals vanish things will improve soon.
Written: November 05, 2022 1St Place Contest Winner November Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 12/23/2022 10:58:00 AM
I'm keeping this one..beautiful
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Date: 11/11/2022 6:37:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Lasaad. You've certainly caught the climate complexities of November, a mercurial month indeed - like "snow... pelted by the rain." Cheers, Brian
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Date: 11/11/2022 5:06:00 AM
You've written quite a descriptive poem in which you point out many wonderful attributes of November. Congratulations on your win, Lasaad.
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Date: 11/11/2022 4:23:00 AM
A huge Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win in Regina's contest, dear outstanding poet friend !
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Date: 11/11/2022 3:15:00 AM
- As always a beautiful poem, Las - Congratulations on your first place in the contest - hugs
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Date: 11/11/2022 1:03:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... vividly capturing the essence of November poetically, enriching me vicariously since I have not seen such November wonders in my country of two seasons. God bless you.
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Date: 11/11/2022 12:19:00 AM
Each word used is very rich in meaning. Great illustration. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/10/2022 11:59:00 PM
Simply brilliant! I just love this. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/6/2022 9:03:00 AM
Your wonderful poem makes me glad it's November, Lasaad. Love the picture, too. This is a fave for me. Blessings
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:29:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Lassad:…….especially your illustration with the leafy couple. Into my FAVS. SuZ
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:09:00 AM
wow, you did this VERY well, and I liked the mysterious man at the end, through the window.
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Date: 11/6/2022 5:38:00 AM
Lovely scenes of November you convey throughout my friend. Changing seasons have their unique beauty--as you portray so well.
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Date: 11/6/2022 2:48:00 AM
You have painted November's glory with bright colors, dearest, Lasaad. What masterful writing, my friend. Be blessed!
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Date: 11/6/2022 12:41:00 AM
You captured gloomy November well Lasaad, bare trees, wind and rain and carpets of leaves everywhere.. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 11/6/2022 12:11:00 AM
For us, November is the beginning of transition. Rain and wind take command and we all hope good weather will return.
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Date: 11/5/2022 11:33:00 PM
November is the month of transition from autumn to winter. The chill and snow of winter are beautifully captured in your poem. A lovely entry for the contest ! All the Best dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/5/2022 7:37:00 PM
November is a lovely month and your poem expresses that in these delightful lines you’ve written Sotto. The picture is beautiful and well suited to your poetry. All the best, blessings… Belle
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