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November the Third

What’d I miss? Clue me in! Deer in headlights… Asleep at the wheel. By all means…after you. Plain as the nose on your face. Ashes to ashes, dust to dust - November the third w a s cliché day! 11/7/2022 A November Nonet Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2022 4:38:00 PM

I agree with Bill. It was creative to use cliches for a cliche day. I really enjoyed this one, Kim. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2022 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2022 1:57:00 PM

Very creative poetry, Kim. A fun read! Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2022 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Robert Franklin

Date: 11/9/2022 5:21:00 AM

This is such a fun poem! Caught me off guard actually in the delivery; simple but so effective.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2022 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/8/2022 7:44:00 AM

Very nice, Kim. The images of November ring true.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 10:02:00 AM

Thanks, Mike!

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/8/2022 7:34:00 AM

In deed...if it is just a date to people, a day we do something repeated the same every year...then that's all it is. A Cliche' world~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 10:03:00 AM

A world of clichés is not a poet’s playground ;) but this nonette wanted what it wanted

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/8/2022 4:43:00 AM

Intriguing...dearest, Kim. Whatever it is, it is well-written. Blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:21:00 AM

It is, isn’t it, my friend…lol! Andrea wanted a more unique November nonette :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/7/2022 11:27:00 PM

Wonder what happened on 3 November. I'm not good at dates. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:22:00 AM

Oh there is the crazy list where every day has something. Examples: Bagel Day, Friendship Day, etc..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2022 7:48:00 PM

And just imagine: I ran roughshod over Nov. 3, leaving no child behind. (Hmm. What?!) ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:24:00 AM

And a trail of clichés from your unrolled tongue. Remember dress to impress…yeah yeah, more awake..what excuse do I have for rambling now lol