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November Occasions Yon citrus ejecting shifts blue eyes green sovereign swallowtails feast midst chartreuse range ~0~ ~0~ ~0~ ~0~ ~0~ whilst background pumpkin skies carve redemption bulbed heels unearth redolent spicy pie 2020 September 22 *1st Place* Double Tetractys 3 ~~Eve Roper Picture #2 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2020 3:50:00 AM

I like the thought penned about the pumpkin skies. I wonder if it has the scent of spice. Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/12/2020 11:23:00 AM

Methinks 'tis a power of suggestion, thanks Sara, Aloha! William

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2020 9:20:00 PM

The rich textures of your poem produce a sensory feast for the autumn season. Congratulations, William, on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2020 10:06:00 PM

Your genteel nature accentuates beyond measure, Susan, many thanks indeed, Aloha! William

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 2:45:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, William. I love the theme in your," November Occasions'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2020 2:49:00 PM

An enjoyed opportunity, Eve, wondrous considerations and I am humble overall for it, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 7:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your first place in the contest ... so beautiful, William :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2020 9:55:00 AM

Many thanks, Anne-Lise, I will and hugs, Aloha! William

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/2/2020 7:02:00 AM

Your tetrachtys certainly is unique, William. Congratulations on your winning entry.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2020 9:57:00 AM

I am grateful for your kindness, Jenna, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/2/2020 6:16:00 AM

Congrats William on your top win!! so much colour and beauty in your poem!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2020 9:59:00 AM

Quite nice of you to say, thanks Krish, Aloha! William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2020 5:44:00 AM

Very nicely penned William. Congratulations! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/2/2020 10:00:00 AM

Thanks Linda, Aloha! William

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2020 2:48:00 PM

wow what a unique take on the theme and I too chose this image!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2020 3:07:00 PM

Many thanks, Jan, for the encouraging words too, Aloha! William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2020 7:07:00 PM

yummy poem and so pretty. That was MY favorite picture too. Well done and thanks for the contest win just now.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/24/2020 8:58:00 PM

Andrea, how sweet of you, alas, mines turned out to be, 'sweet potato', balanced taste methinks, most welcomed as well, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/23/2020 12:44:00 PM

Vivid picture. This is such a beautiful use of color, William. Your poem vibrates with a visceral experience. I had to shade my eyes from the sunlight escaping from your words. Best of luck in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/23/2020 1:07:00 PM

You humble me, Sam, 'visceral' blanked my memorable use of it when I happen upon intriguing customers at the hotels, heart filled thanks for the encouragement my friend, Aloha! William