William Kelii Kekaula Poet Tetractys

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November Occasions

November Occasions

Yon
citrus
ejecting
shifts blue eyes green
sovereign swallowtails feast midst chartreuse range 
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whilst background pumpkin skies carve redemption
bulbed heels unearth
redolent
spicy
pie

2020 September 22
*1st Place*
Double Tetractys 3
~~Eve Roper
Picture #2
1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1

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Sara Kendrick October 12, 2020 at 3:50 AM I like the thought penned about the pumpkin skies. I wonder if it has the scent of spice. Congrats on your winning work. Sara William Kelii Kekaula October 12, 2020 at 11:23 AM Methinks 'tis a power of suggestion, thanks Sara, Aloha! William

Susan Ashley October 3, 2020 at 9:20 PM The rich textures of your poem produce a sensory feast for the autumn season. Congratulations, William, on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan William Kelii Kekaula October 3, 2020 at 10:06 PM Your genteel nature accentuates beyond measure, Susan, many thanks indeed, Aloha! William

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 2:45 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, William. I love the theme in your," November Occasions'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve" William Kelii Kekaula October 2, 2020 at 2:49 PM An enjoyed opportunity, Eve, wondrous considerations and I am humble overall for it, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:40 AM - Congratulations on your first place in the contest ... so beautiful, William :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula October 2, 2020 at 9:55 AM Many thanks, Anne-Lise, I will and hugs, Aloha! William

Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 7:02 AM Your tetrachtys certainly is unique, William. Congratulations on your winning entry. William Kelii Kekaula October 2, 2020 at 9:57 AM I am grateful for your kindness, Jenna, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna October 2, 2020 at 6:16 AM Congrats William on your top win!! so much colour and beauty in your poem!! William Kelii Kekaula October 2, 2020 at 9:59 AM Quite nice of you to say, thanks Krish, Aloha! William

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 5:44 AM Very nicely penned William. Congratulations! Linda William Kelii Kekaula October 2, 2020 at 10:00 AM Thanks Linda, Aloha! William

Jan Allison September 26, 2020 at 2:48 PM wow what a unique take on the theme and I too chose this image!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2020 at 3:07 PM Many thanks, Jan, for the encouraging words too, Aloha! William

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2020 at 7:07 PM yummy poem and so pretty. That was MY favorite picture too. Well done and thanks for the contest win just now. William Kelii Kekaula September 24, 2020 at 8:58 PM Andrea, how sweet of you, alas, mines turned out to be, 'sweet potato', balanced taste methinks, most welcomed as well, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman September 23, 2020 at 12:44 PM Vivid picture. This is such a beautiful use of color, William. Your poem vibrates with a visceral experience. I had to shade my eyes from the sunlight escaping from your words. Best of luck in the contest. William Kelii Kekaula September 23, 2020 at 1:07 PM You humble me, Sam, 'visceral' blanked my memorable use of it when I happen upon intriguing customers at the hotels, heart filled thanks for the encouragement my friend, Aloha! William