November Letter

A snow-filled world
   is a bowl just so wide
   with an intimate, friendly
   feeling inside.
Earth's lonesome toil
   was the dark yesterday;
   soon it will stain
   crystal carpet to grey.
But in world lately born,
   they lock arms and shout
   where the boot tracks meet
   when the path's shoveled out.
Quick-frozen blossoms
   sprout from hellos
   and flower from fellow
   explorers of snows.
A bouquet of echoes
   to exile has come
   in a sealed packet pocked
   by a wet woolen thumb.
Unlovely dear blot,
   it remembers the thrill
   of a streak down the slide
   of a snow-covered hill,
The trailing fine thread 
   of skates spinning by,
   a braided ski path
   binding valley to sky. 
Reach out a greeting
   with frost-reddened hand;
   sun-burned fingers
   trace in dry white sand.

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Date: 10/25/2022 7:33:00 PM
This is a magnificent poem, Elizabeth... I noticed that you somehow got that four-letter word in the first line past the censors. (You know, the word that starts with 's' and ends with 'w.'). LOL. ~ Never met a shovel I liked
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Date: 10/25/2022 2:09:00 AM
Lovely poem on winter and the snow covered land. Happy to have read your poem written in an exquisite way! Thank you dear poet friend for your kind visit to my page.....
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Date: 10/24/2022 4:01:00 PM
What a lovely theme Elizabeth truly enjoyed reading. So talented you are to write so well...
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/24/2022 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Michael. Kind of you to comment. Elizabeth
Date: 10/24/2022 11:31:00 AM
You have reminded us that, be us wet, cold, and miserable, some will still find joy and happiness. Well done! Aloha!
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/24/2022 4:24:00 PM
Right, Rico. Happiness to you! Here in Aussie land, we don't have much of the cold but it's sure doggone WET! Elizabeth
Date: 10/24/2022 3:42:00 AM
Such beauty could only have been written by you. A rich verse.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/24/2022 4:25:00 PM
That hum you hear in the background is me purring!! Elizabeth
Date: 10/23/2022 9:43:00 PM
Elizabeth, the beauty of your poem brought tears. I absolutely love it. Evelyn
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/24/2022 2:06:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Evelyn! You are so adept yourself, I value your opinion. Elizabeth
Date: 10/23/2022 3:31:00 PM
Elizabeth, this is so beautiful, and I enjoyed the interesting format in which you presented it. Fine writing, my dear friend.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/23/2022 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Milt. As always I am touched by your kindness. Elizabeth
Date: 10/23/2022 3:26:00 PM
You penned an uplifting poem, Elizabeth. This is one of the best poems I come across today. Your vividness and your vivid imagery shed a great layer of beauty and calmness. Hugs and regards
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/23/2022 7:35:00 PM
I do appreciate your response to my visual imagery. Those pictures in my mind are the reason I write. It's so lovely when you are there with your catcher's mitt! Elizabeth
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