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November Intrigue--Five Haikus

November Intrigue--Five Haikus Moss breathes dampness, near shifting blankets of old leaves. Beds of lichen thrive. Both pure and pungent, the air is soul-enhancing, gifting faint wood smoke. On the forest floor, Princess Pine grows sweetly in pristine patches. Old stone foundations and a gurgling waterfall capture heavy mist. Dark reeds cross the marsh to a long strand of young spruce, vivid and spritely.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/12/2022 11:00:00 AM

This has nice flow, very enjoyable.

Carol Mays
Date: 8/20/2022 8:05:00 PM

Thank you.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/17/2022 10:12:00 AM

Your poem brought me joy and a little relief from the heat on this balmy summer afternoon. I cannot wait for the Fall season to come around once more... Keep up the great writing, Carol. It was nice to read your wonderful work again, my friend!

Carol Mays
Date: 8/20/2022 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Kelly. It is good to hear from you again.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2022 2:10:00 PM

This has very nice flow. I especially like Haiku 2,3, and 5.

Carol Mays
Date: 5/30/2022 9:54:00 PM

Thank you for your words and for reminding me of the poem. It gave me a chance to enjoy the walk to my brother's house again.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/19/2021 2:48:00 AM

Love these.. I love the month. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Carol Mays
Date: 7/23/2021 8:25:00 PM

Thank you! I'm lucky to be living where I am. I just wrote down things I experienced on a walk to my brother's house.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/19/2021 1:34:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Carol ~

Carol Mays
Date: 7/23/2021 8:26:00 PM

Thank you.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/30/2021 6:25:00 PM

This is breathtaking Carol. I am a nature lover from way back and the imagery here s wonderful. God Bless, JB

Carol Mays
Date: 7/23/2021 8:27:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/1/2020 5:07:00 AM

Carol, Breathing the earthy smells with you. A beautiful glimpse of nature through your eyes this morning while it snows lightly outside my window. Love the idea of grouping these together to form a complete picture. SuZ

Carol Mays
Date: 12/1/2020 8:06:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate your reaction.