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NOVEMBER IN GEORGIA

Heap of leaves, fluttering. There is no rain to restrain their act. Blustery winds animate; backyard drift.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2023 6:21:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! You are an inspiration as are many in this writing community. Bless you.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/25/2023 2:14:00 PM

Animated leaves dancing through the back yard...love it Kim Congratulations! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2023 6:13:00 PM

It is fun to watch early Autumn! Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Ninette write. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:28:00 PM

I think I would love November there, Kim. Congrats and happy thanksgiving

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2023 6:11:00 AM

Thank you! Happy Thanksgiving!

Marilene Evans

Date: 11/23/2023 1:01:00 PM

This reminds me of the song Midnight Train to Georgia. I was there one summer. Congratulations, Kim. Happy Thanksgiving.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2023 6:12:00 AM

Thank you! Great song,

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/10/2023 12:30:00 PM

I love windy days, Georgia sounds like a dream. Great entry, Kim! God bless us all

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thank you, Ana ya! God bless you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/9/2023 1:38:00 AM

Of all the elements, the wind is what I hate most. Lovely poem. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:14:00 AM

The beauty of seeing freewheeling leaves. God bless you, sweet poet!

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/8/2023 7:51:00 PM

This is very well written, Kim. Thankfully we've been getting a little rain over here. A good easy read, should do well. Great to see you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:16:00 AM

I wasn’t aware of the drought until my dad said something. We only use a streaming service so I’m not always in the know and I hadn’t noticed. Hopefully soon we will get some rain! Hugs ~ Kim

Paige Hind

Date: 11/8/2023 6:36:00 PM

Gorgeous. Absolutely a wonderful write!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:16:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Bill Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 4:08:00 PM

Excellent Ninette, Kim. I can remember all the leaves in our yard when I lived outside of Atlanta. Nice memories, thank you. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:16:00 AM

Where in Atlanta did you live?

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 2:52:00 PM

I loved the 'feel' of this poem, Kim. Was quite taken by 'there is no rain to restrain their act.' Most artistic. Faving this one, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sara!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/8/2023 11:34:00 AM

Anything 'hallucinatory' about the movement of those leaves, without rain to tamp them down? ~ Ellis Dee

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2023 12:21:00 PM

Geez…lol! I suppose you could smoke them but they’ll only make you Rocky Mountain high ;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2023 6:21:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, my friend. A FAVE for splendid weaving of images-- saying much in just a few words.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2023 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay!