NOVEMBER IN GEORGIA

Heap of leaves, fluttering. There is no rain to restrain their act. Blustery winds animate; backyard drift.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thank you, Sara! You are an inspiration as are many in this writing community. Bless you.
Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:14 PM
Animated leaves dancing through the back yard...love it Kim Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:13 PM
It is fun to watch early Autumn! Thank you :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Ninette write.  Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Thank you, Paula! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:28 PM
I think I would love November there, Kim. Congrats and happy thanksgiving
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Thank you! Happy Thanksgiving!
Evans Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 1:01 PM
This reminds me of the song Midnight Train to Georgia. I was there one summer. Congratulations, Kim. Happy Thanksgiving.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Thank you! Great song,
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:30 PM
I love windy days, Georgia sounds like a dream. Great entry, Kim! God bless us all
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, Ana ya! God bless you!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Of all the elements, the wind is what I hate most. Lovely poem. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:14 AM
The beauty of seeing freewheeling leaves. God bless you, sweet poet!
Turner Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:51 PM
This is very well written, Kim. Thankfully we've been getting a little rain over here. A good easy read, should do well. Great to see you!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:16 AM
I wasn’t aware of the drought until my dad said something. We only use a streaming service so I’m not always in the know and I hadn’t noticed. Hopefully soon we will get some rain! Hugs ~ Kim
Hind Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Gorgeous. Absolutely a wonderful write!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Baker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Excellent Ninette, Kim. I can remember all the leaves in our yard when I lived outside of Atlanta. Nice memories, thank you. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Where in Atlanta did you live?
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Anything 'hallucinatory' about the movement of those leaves, without rain to tamp them down? ~ Ellis Dee
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Geez…lol! I suppose you could smoke them but they’ll only make you Rocky Mountain high ;)
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Beautiful imagery, my friend. A FAVE for splendid weaving of images-- saying much in just a few words.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay!
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